for The Date6/30/2004 c9 
10starsprinkles9604
Very very cute story and ending! I had lost in touch with this particular piece and thought, hm, I wonder what's going on with it. But yeah, awesome writing. You had just enough so that it wasn't an overkil on words but that there was enough for th reader, if that makes sense. I wish I could do that! All I seem to do is write write write! Perfect length here.
I felt horrible for Scott when he got thrown up on, but it was cool that Tessa was around to help him out. Very very nice writing.
Peace love and skittles!
10starsprinkles9604Very very cute story and ending! I had lost in touch with this particular piece and thought, hm, I wonder what's going on with it. But yeah, awesome writing. You had just enough so that it wasn't an overkil on words but that there was enough for th reader, if that makes sense. I wish I could do that! All I seem to do is write write write! Perfect length here.
I felt horrible for Scott when he got thrown up on, but it was cool that Tessa was around to help him out. Very very nice writing.
Peace love and skittles!
6/26/2004 c9 98Not Just a Little Girl
Wow.. this is brilliant! Your writing is fantastic -especially the description :D
Loved every chapter of it :)
98Not Just a Little GirlWow.. this is brilliant! Your writing is fantastic -especially the description :D
Loved every chapter of it :)
11/12/2003 c8 Alex and Louisey
Tehe I'm laughing, but lousiey ain't Lol MORE PLEASE
LOVE
ALEX
ps
Tehe I'm laughing, but lousiey ain't Lol MORE PLEASE
LOVE
ALEX
ps
11/12/2003 c8 Alex and Louisey
Tehe I'm laughing, but lousiey ain't Lol MORE PLEASE
LOVE
ALEX
ps
Tehe I'm laughing, but lousiey ain't Lol MORE PLEASE
LOVE
ALEX
ps
9/25/2003 c6 Random Girl
OH COL! RED LACE! I LOVE U SUZI! Now all I need is a date hm...
Oh yeah and is that dress the same one as the one in my planner I drew?
OH COL! RED LACE! I LOVE U SUZI! Now all I need is a date hm...
Oh yeah and is that dress the same one as the one in my planner I drew?
9/4/2003 c5 Alex
NO ONE LISTENS TO ME? Eh...*Shrugs* Lol MUSHROOMS ON TOAST! Hehehe Randomness strikes again. C ya at Lunch
Love Alex
BOOGERS! Lol \\(^_^)/
NO ONE LISTENS TO ME? Eh...*Shrugs* Lol MUSHROOMS ON TOAST! Hehehe Randomness strikes again. C ya at Lunch
Love Alex
BOOGERS! Lol \\(^_^)/
8/5/2003 c4 Alex
I AM IN THE STORY! YEY
Hey... Suzi... Do i get a superheroine costume coz I want one Lol
Thankies *Hugz*
MORE CHAPTERS!
please Lol ::Giggles::
Alex X
I AM IN THE STORY! YEY
Hey... Suzi... Do i get a superheroine costume coz I want one Lol
Thankies *Hugz*
MORE CHAPTERS!
please Lol ::Giggles::
Alex X
7/17/2003 c3 10starsprinkles9604
Good chapter. I think you should do another point of view, just to get some other input by another student, like someone who hadn't really notcied him before, but does now. Are you going to have him eventually get Jennifer? If you did, then she could be that person who noticed. It all depends on what exactly it is that you want to happen in this story.
10starsprinkles9604Good chapter. I think you should do another point of view, just to get some other input by another student, like someone who hadn't really notcied him before, but does now. Are you going to have him eventually get Jennifer? If you did, then she could be that person who noticed. It all depends on what exactly it is that you want to happen in this story.
7/17/2003 c1 starsprinkles9604
really really good chapter. Poor scott...getting ditched by her...she certainly wasn't very nice! Good chapter though.
Peace love and skittles
really really good chapter. Poor scott...getting ditched by her...she certainly wasn't very nice! Good chapter though.
Peace love and skittles
7/14/2003 c3 LadyAnesta to lazy to sign in
hehehe :)
more! 0:)
*Anesta*
hehehe :)
more! 0:)
*Anesta*
7/8/2003 c3 Deana Bell
Wow. You have amazing writing talent, especially in the descriptive area. Pretty great how you turned a one-chapter thing into a...um...multi-chapter thing. Thanks for the review! ~God bless~
Wow. You have amazing writing talent, especially in the descriptive area. Pretty great how you turned a one-chapter thing into a...um...multi-chapter thing. Thanks for the review! ~God bless~
7/2/2003 c3 5Lost Butterfly
O.o...o.O...DAMN YOU!...You can write in first person...LOL... I like it... It's kute...Scott seems kute in a dorky way... I think maybe Jo likes him? @. I like the way you described things, wished i can be that descripedtive.;_; UPDATE SOON! I wanna know more... Arigatou(thank-you) for your review...It really meant lots...Thank-you...lol...I need help on my story though...
~always~
§~*Shorti*~§
5Lost ButterflyO.o...o.O...DAMN YOU!...You can write in first person...LOL... I like it... It's kute...Scott seems kute in a dorky way... I think maybe Jo likes him? @. I like the way you described things, wished i can be that descripedtive.;_; UPDATE SOON! I wanna know more... Arigatou(thank-you) for your review...It really meant lots...Thank-you...lol...I need help on my story though...
~always~
§~*Shorti*~§
6/25/2003 c3 FFStoryteller
Hm... The Janitor as my boyfriend... He better be a spy under cover then! Lol JK well I LOVE ::Runs about insanely:: the story and so does Luigi (Louise Squidgy-widgy) Lol don't ask me where that came from, well must go and insult the REAL Scott Hende now Lol
Love
Alex X
Hm... The Janitor as my boyfriend... He better be a spy under cover then! Lol JK well I LOVE ::Runs about insanely:: the story and so does Luigi (Louise Squidgy-widgy) Lol don't ask me where that came from, well must go and insult the REAL Scott Hende now Lol
Love
Alex X