Reviews: The Beautiful Ache

8/8/2003 c1

35Jane Austen the 2nd
Really nice.I thought it seemed slightly sketchy but maybe you wanted some things left out for thought. Good Stuff!

6/1/2003 c1

2blinkie
nice imagery. i think there's something missing though. the transition between the lines "i am crying for release" and "what is this agonizing ache" seems a bit rough. nonetheless, it's a good poem. keep it up ^_^

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