for Winds of Change Formerly Betrayed8/29/2007 c16 
4Nicole Deming
I just wanted to tell you that I really liked your book. I am looking forward to the epilogue.
4Nicole DemingI just wanted to tell you that I really liked your book. I am looking forward to the epilogue.
11/4/2003 c15 Coral Chimera
Hey, cool story you have here, would like to know how the whole story resolves...good suspense elements!
Hey, cool story you have here, would like to know how the whole story resolves...good suspense elements!
10/29/2003 c14 11jules2206
aw so sweet, I really hope they do find his dad, please update soon, BUHBAI!
11jules2206aw so sweet, I really hope they do find his dad, please update soon, BUHBAI!
10/14/2003 c13 2Laralie
FINALLY Claire admits it...unfortunately it looks like thing wont be perfect QUITE yet. But then again maybe if he does die then they really can move on with their lives once and for all...
2LaralieFINALLY Claire admits it...unfortunately it looks like thing wont be perfect QUITE yet. But then again maybe if he does die then they really can move on with their lives once and for all...
10/5/2003 c11 3Celestial Apparition
pictures of criminals or of Claire and Peter or of Kimmy and some guy or of illegal things that get Cliare and Peter arrested. lol sorry...imagination and hyperness don't work well together. lol
~*Much Love*~
P.S I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORY, PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
3Celestial Apparitionpictures of criminals or of Claire and Peter or of Kimmy and some guy or of illegal things that get Cliare and Peter arrested. lol sorry...imagination and hyperness don't work well together. lol
~*Much Love*~
P.S I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORY, PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
10/1/2003 c10 2Laralie
God Poor Claire...I would be so devestated if I were her. And know around her seems to really get it. Her best friend thinks she was "helping" her and Peter doesnt seem to fully get it either. She obviously did love her fiance some, in order to want to marry him.
2LaralieGod Poor Claire...I would be so devestated if I were her. And know around her seems to really get it. Her best friend thinks she was "helping" her and Peter doesnt seem to fully get it either. She obviously did love her fiance some, in order to want to marry him.
10/1/2003 c4 4Lia Crystal
yo! i'm really digging this story-can't wait to read the rest. the dialogue is superb! keep up the good writing!
4Lia Crystalyo! i'm really digging this story-can't wait to read the rest. the dialogue is superb! keep up the good writing!