for Winds of Change Formerly Betrayed9/17/2003 c8 
2Laralie
OK, Kimmy could have found another way to go about her little plan here. What she did was still horrible. I don't trust her. Peter seems so sweet. He and Claire better reunite!
2LaralieOK, Kimmy could have found another way to go about her little plan here. What she did was still horrible. I don't trust her. Peter seems so sweet. He and Claire better reunite!
9/17/2003 c8 Resurrected
Wow, this is really good. I realy like the dialogue...and it's so obvious they're meant to be together! Update soon please!
Wow, this is really good. I realy like the dialogue...and it's so obvious they're meant to be together! Update soon please!
8/25/2003 c7 5aqua-angel
Whoa, not bad. The story is nicely written, great work with the dialogue. Keep on writing.
5aqua-angelWhoa, not bad. The story is nicely written, great work with the dialogue. Keep on writing.
8/17/2003 c6 2Laralie
Ha, I love women like Claire. With that red hot personality, we need more women who are like that. Even though I hope she eventually warms up to Peter because its obvious she is still in love with him and this could be why (besides the whole kimmy deal) her last relationship would have never have worked. Peter is a nice guy too, a little emotional a times though.
2LaralieHa, I love women like Claire. With that red hot personality, we need more women who are like that. Even though I hope she eventually warms up to Peter because its obvious she is still in love with him and this could be why (besides the whole kimmy deal) her last relationship would have never have worked. Peter is a nice guy too, a little emotional a times though.
8/15/2003 c5 Laralie
Yeah! I am glad Claire is finally starting to warm up to Peter again. I really hope he helps her and they work things out. I like the flashbacks, they help give the story more backround anf information. Keep writing please!
Yeah! I am glad Claire is finally starting to warm up to Peter again. I really hope he helps her and they work things out. I like the flashbacks, they help give the story more backround anf information. Keep writing please!
8/9/2003 c4 Laralie
So Kimmy is a ho. Peter seems like a very nice guy still. Poor Claire...I like her a lot though. YEAH GLAD YOU UPDATE!
So Kimmy is a ho. Peter seems like a very nice guy still. Poor Claire...I like her a lot though. YEAH GLAD YOU UPDATE!
8/4/2003 c3 Laralie
Well I was looking at this and it said you hand't updated in a while so I am hoping you haven't just dropped this story because I would like to see where it goes. Poor Claire :( Luck does not seem to be with her these days. Hope things work out. Hope you continue.
Well I was looking at this and it said you hand't updated in a while so I am hoping you haven't just dropped this story because I would like to see where it goes. Poor Claire :( Luck does not seem to be with her these days. Hope things work out. Hope you continue.
8/4/2003 c2 Laralie
Kimmy is a conniving manipulative bitch. I hate her already and I have not even met her character yet. I actually sympathize a lot with Claire. Her character is very interesting. Peter seems like an okay guy too. Ugh but I don't like Kimmy. Or Brandon for that matter.
Kimmy is a conniving manipulative bitch. I hate her already and I have not even met her character yet. I actually sympathize a lot with Claire. Her character is very interesting. Peter seems like an okay guy too. Ugh but I don't like Kimmy. Or Brandon for that matter.
8/4/2003 c1 Laralie
Oh la la! This is all full of twisty stuff. Very intriguing. I really like it so far. You did a good job leaving people hanging and hooked on the first chapter. I will definitly precede to the next chapter. PS I also really like your writing style. Very nice.
Oh la la! This is all full of twisty stuff. Very intriguing. I really like it so far. You did a good job leaving people hanging and hooked on the first chapter. I will definitly precede to the next chapter. PS I also really like your writing style. Very nice.