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5/31/2003 c1 41WalkingOnWater
ah! that's very very very very good i like it a lot! it was really long but i thought it flowed pretty nicely! A few things threw me off, how you stretched the rhyming scheme in a couple places, like the words "origin" and "grin", or "saviour" and "near" i saw a couple others, but thats not the point! it was still very well done nonetheless! I love it! great job. Oh, and i haven't written in a few months so the poems you had read were from a while ago. Haha, i think i'll write again after i recover from writing 270 things in my creative writing class! 3 assignments a day in that dumb class, can't wait till school ends next week! ...yeah, so anyways great job and i'll stop whinning!

Love and Peace =_=
5/24/2003 c1 106cosmo-queen
This poem was alright. I really liked the beginning but the mood seemed to change somewhere in the middle of the poem. That's not a bad thing but I think it resulted in a weaker ending. Nevertheless, it's a good poem so keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*

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