Reviews: Zebras, cinquain

3/13/2012 c1 jen
zebras

slender legs

cluster in herd

eyes of their predators

gallops

12/10/2003 c1

210Kelpylion
OH, that's perfect! I love the pacing of this-like you're a confused predator staring at the zebras...

6/16/2003 c1

100Keep it 100
Another job well done.

~Heart of the Sword

5/27/2003 c1

76CoolBeans18s
Brilliant! You described zebras incrediably well. Great job!

~ CoolBeans18s