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10/2/2004 c1 301sirius chatham
Amazing. I love the imagery. i can picture a voodoo doll in my head.
Nice metaphor, as a whole.
Sirius Chatham
p.s. r/r my stuff; and how do you get so many damn reviews? You must let me in on ur secret
2/5/2004 c1 8Bleeding-Gemstone
;x Wow. That was incredibly intense.
8/11/2003 c1 7Dark Hamadryad
I agree with you on the domestic violence thing. To quote Hermine from the first movie, "That's totally barbaric." And she was talking about Wizard's Chess.

6/27/2003 c1 292Fabian Cortez

6/20/2003 c1 12Silverlight Elf
Sorry no reveiws in a while Sal! I am kinda grounded from the computer! I'll review all the peoms I havn't read for a while!

Anyways, this one was GREAT! how did u come up with it?
6/18/2003 c1 13Davido Martino
Very touching. Excellent. Every good remark.
6/14/2003 c1 1Jimmy Jazz
Oh wow, this is amazing. So inspirational. Wow.
5/30/2003 c1 98Not Just a Little Girl
O i love the way you structured this one. the subject matters is powerful and i think you dealt with it really well.
5/26/2003 c1 Amme1212
Sorry.. I'm not signed in at the moment... But in my opinon this is a bit confusing. Can you explain it a bit better... it was too short but other than that it was awesome!
5/25/2003 c1 62Twistedlyinsane
Man that kind of thing sickens me.^_^another great poem.
5/25/2003 c1 41Erotic Antibiotic
I know how that feels, i like your style. Keep writing.
5/25/2003 c1 The Black Rider
Alas, it is a horrible thing that such acts can be perpetrated. Great job.
5/25/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
This was a very true, powerful piece. Domestic abuse does sicken me as well. A think a man is at his absolute lowest when he takes beats a wife or girlfriend. It is just plain wrong and evil.

~Heart of the Sword
5/25/2003 c1 23Aveline
Wow - i really liked this. The angst of the poem was very powerful.It's such a hard topic to write about really and i thought you dealt with it well.
5/25/2003 c1 79deepdown
very strong. the phrases are really powerful...

rhyming doesnt matter, but maybe you could make the rhythm a bit more distinct.

part from that, well done, keep on writing.

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