for Voodoo Doll10/2/2004 c1 
301sirius chatham
Amazing. I love the imagery. i can picture a voodoo doll in my head.
Nice metaphor, as a whole.
Sirius Chatham
p.s. r/r my stuff; and how do you get so many damn reviews? You must let me in on ur secret
301sirius chathamAmazing. I love the imagery. i can picture a voodoo doll in my head.
Nice metaphor, as a whole.
Sirius Chatham
p.s. r/r my stuff; and how do you get so many damn reviews? You must let me in on ur secret
8/11/2003 c1 7Dark Hamadryad
I agree with you on the domestic violence thing. To quote Hermine from the first movie, "That's totally barbaric." And she was talking about Wizard's Chess.
~Luna
7Dark HamadryadI agree with you on the domestic violence thing. To quote Hermine from the first movie, "That's totally barbaric." And she was talking about Wizard's Chess.
~Luna
6/20/2003 c1 12Silverlight Elf
Sorry no reveiws in a while Sal! I am kinda grounded from the computer! I'll review all the peoms I havn't read for a while!
Anyways, this one was GREAT! how did u come up with it?
12Silverlight ElfSorry no reveiws in a while Sal! I am kinda grounded from the computer! I'll review all the peoms I havn't read for a while!
Anyways, this one was GREAT! how did u come up with it?
5/30/2003 c1 98Not Just a Little Girl
O i love the way you structured this one. the subject matters is powerful and i think you dealt with it really well.
98Not Just a Little GirlO i love the way you structured this one. the subject matters is powerful and i think you dealt with it really well.
5/26/2003 c1 Amme1212
Sorry.. I'm not signed in at the moment... But in my opinon this is a bit confusing. Can you explain it a bit better... it was too short but other than that it was awesome!
Sorry.. I'm not signed in at the moment... But in my opinon this is a bit confusing. Can you explain it a bit better... it was too short but other than that it was awesome!
5/25/2003 c1 The Black Rider
Alas, it is a horrible thing that such acts can be perpetrated. Great job.
Alas, it is a horrible thing that such acts can be perpetrated. Great job.
5/25/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
This was a very true, powerful piece. Domestic abuse does sicken me as well. A think a man is at his absolute lowest when he takes beats a wife or girlfriend. It is just plain wrong and evil.
~Heart of the Sword
100Keep it 100This was a very true, powerful piece. Domestic abuse does sicken me as well. A think a man is at his absolute lowest when he takes beats a wife or girlfriend. It is just plain wrong and evil.
~Heart of the Sword