for Sunset6/18/2003 c1 
13Davido Martino
AW. A sunset is one of nature's beautys. The colours and scenery is fantastic. And you've translated that into a couple of lines. Fan-tastic. Well done.
13Davido MartinoAW. A sunset is one of nature's beautys. The colours and scenery is fantastic. And you've translated that into a couple of lines. Fan-tastic. Well done.
6/9/2003 c1 lostinscotland
prettiful! once again...dunno how to review poetry. terribly sorry :'(
i have updated!
prettiful! once again...dunno how to review poetry. terribly sorry :'(
i have updated!
6/6/2003 c1 106cosmo-queen
Beautiful. I love sunset. And sunrise too. Great work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenBeautiful. I love sunset. And sunrise too. Great work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
5/26/2003 c1 7Dark Hamadryad
The poem seems unfinished. Almost as if there was going to be a continuation after the last line...
~Luna
7Dark HamadryadThe poem seems unfinished. Almost as if there was going to be a continuation after the last line...
~Luna
5/25/2003 c1 62Twistedlyinsane
hm makes me want to just take a time out from life and watch a sunset.^_^
62Twistedlyinsanehm makes me want to just take a time out from life and watch a sunset.^_^
5/25/2003 c1 41Erotic Antibiotic
Spiffy, I can't write nature stuff...but i liked this one. Really awsome.
41Erotic AntibioticSpiffy, I can't write nature stuff...but i liked this one. Really awsome.
5/25/2003 c1 176DefianceIsMe
That is so true...beauty at its peak...too bad no one bothers to notice most of the time...except us writers and artists...
176DefianceIsMeThat is so true...beauty at its peak...too bad no one bothers to notice most of the time...except us writers and artists...
5/25/2003 c1 267Lady B.V Rose
Pretty! ^_^
"Sweet guys should be made illegal - they steal your heart!" - Me
x Nicole x
267Lady B.V RosePretty! ^_^
"Sweet guys should be made illegal - they steal your heart!" - Me
x Nicole x
5/25/2003 c1 The Black Rider
A gorgeous description. You've inspired a new poem for Wonderland. Congratulations. You've cured my writer's block.
A gorgeous description. You've inspired a new poem for Wonderland. Congratulations. You've cured my writer's block.