2/4/2010 c11 Poptart Guava King
This made me smile. I just loved it tons. My mom told be to stop grinning like an idiot. :P
This made me smile. I just loved it tons. My mom told be to stop grinning like an idiot. :P
5/25/2008 c5 4frolic-horror
Go evil Kenri! :))
Hmm... it's not about the rape being accurate or not... why does it matter if the guy cummed inside Shiyue or not?... some weird culture related thing specific to this universe maybe?
Go evil Kenri! :))
Hmm... it's not about the rape being accurate or not... why does it matter if the guy cummed inside Shiyue or not?... some weird culture related thing specific to this universe maybe?
5/25/2008 c4 frolic-horror
He got raped? But... I believed he was a good fighter (and not just with magic)...
He got raped? But... I believed he was a good fighter (and not just with magic)...
5/25/2008 c3 frolic-horror
Things developed kind of fast... but I guess they didn't have a choice 'cause of the hot taking-a-bath-together thing going on :P
Things developed kind of fast... but I guess they didn't have a choice 'cause of the hot taking-a-bath-together thing going on :P
5/25/2008 c1 frolic-horror
Thank god for the author note at the end... I was getting confused with all the names starting with "shi" :PP
This story seems to have all the elements I love... nice beginning... will review some more... :P
Thank god for the author note at the end... I was getting confused with all the names starting with "shi" :PP
This story seems to have all the elements I love... nice beginning... will review some more... :P
1/18/2008 c2 5paputsza
rule #2 mullets are bad, especially silvered on and in the world of guyxguy 5'10 is short.
rule #2 mullets are bad, especially silvered on and in the world of guyxguy 5'10 is short.
1/18/2008 c1 paputsza
hum, the unwritten rules of yaoi say that a seme is over six feet and a uke is under six feet. Though if the uke and the seme are less than four inches of each other they may interchange, however sparingly.
hum, the unwritten rules of yaoi say that a seme is over six feet and a uke is under six feet. Though if the uke and the seme are less than four inches of each other they may interchange, however sparingly.
4/20/2007 c6 Otome Umi
*sniffle* It's so cute! *bursts into tears* I love you so much!
*sniffle* It's so cute! *bursts into tears* I love you so much!
4/20/2007 c5 Otome Umi
I love you! ^-^ Haha! That *bleep* Gri-whatever got what was comin to him!
I love you! ^-^ Haha! That *bleep* Gri-whatever got what was comin to him!
4/20/2007 c2 Otome Umi
Oh, *appluad* (I am bad at spelling... FORGIVE ME!) You horrible person. Torchuring poo Kenri like that... But thank you for the chapter!
Oh, *appluad* (I am bad at spelling... FORGIVE ME!) You horrible person. Torchuring poo Kenri like that... But thank you for the chapter!
4/20/2007 c1 Otome Umi
This is pretty good! You're really creative. Keep writing! You have so much potencial!
This is pretty good! You're really creative. Keep writing! You have so much potencial!
5/25/2006 c2 skybluey
ohh! seems like Kenri is falling hard for Shiyue! ^_^ I am reallying enjoying this story!
ohh! seems like Kenri is falling hard for Shiyue! ^_^ I am reallying enjoying this story!