for Frustration1/8/2004 c1 
17And Emo is Cliche
This is powerful, it's good.
By the way, this is Silverlight elf. My stuff is a little mor morbid, but I hope you like it just the same. its around 11:30 and I have Midterms to study for.. so I'll read some more later. I wanna get back to reading your story too!
17And Emo is ClicheThis is powerful, it's good.
By the way, this is Silverlight elf. My stuff is a little mor morbid, but I hope you like it just the same. its around 11:30 and I have Midterms to study for.. so I'll read some more later. I wanna get back to reading your story too!
6/27/2003 c1 292Fabian Cortez
Message across, but have to be honest didn't move me like all of your others.
Still good writing though.
FC
292Fabian CortezMessage across, but have to be honest didn't move me like all of your others.
Still good writing though.
FC
6/20/2003 c1 12Silverlight Elf
Very nice. I would've added the acid running up the throat, but you couldn't so it was great just the same!
12Silverlight ElfVery nice. I would've added the acid running up the throat, but you couldn't so it was great just the same!
6/18/2003 c1 13Davido Martino
;):)Excellent. A simple haiku brings me to my knees. If you know what i mean, oh forget it.
Well done!
13Davido Martino;):)Excellent. A simple haiku brings me to my knees. If you know what i mean, oh forget it.
Well done!
5/26/2003 c1 lostinscotland
heh, i know that feeling. it comes more when i'm messing with my stupid math, though...
'course, back when i did attempt a guitar, i felt that way, too. rather distressing
heh, i know that feeling. it comes more when i'm messing with my stupid math, though...
'course, back when i did attempt a guitar, i felt that way, too. rather distressing
5/26/2003 c1 Amme1212
Hee hee.. I really know how that feels like. So many times have a felt that feeling... a bit too many times in my opinion.. but that's life. Short and sweet, nice!
Hee hee.. I really know how that feels like. So many times have a felt that feeling... a bit too many times in my opinion.. but that's life. Short and sweet, nice!
5/26/2003 c1 76CoolBeans18s
Gosh, I feel like this all the time when I play the flute. The feeling is very well convayed. Brilliant job!
~ CoolBeans18s
76CoolBeans18sGosh, I feel like this all the time when I play the flute. The feeling is very well convayed. Brilliant job!
~ CoolBeans18s
5/26/2003 c1 15Isay
Wow... I feel like that sometimes when I play the piano and I can't seem to get the notes right.
~Isay
15IsayWow... I feel like that sometimes when I play the piano and I can't seem to get the notes right.
~Isay
5/26/2003 c1 1Jimmy Jazz
Oh wow. Absolutely fantastic. Excellent, I could almost feel the frustration and... oh wow. Simply amazing.
1Jimmy JazzOh wow. Absolutely fantastic. Excellent, I could almost feel the frustration and... oh wow. Simply amazing.