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1/8/2004 c1 17And Emo is Cliche
This is powerful, it's good.
By the way, this is Silverlight elf. My stuff is a little mor morbid, but I hope you like it just the same. its around 11:30 and I have Midterms to study for.. so I'll read some more later. I wanna get back to reading your story too!
6/27/2003 c1 292Fabian Cortez
Message across, but have to be honest didn't move me like all of your others.

Still good writing though.

6/20/2003 c1 12Silverlight Elf
Very nice. I would've added the acid running up the throat, but you couldn't so it was great just the same!
6/18/2003 c1 13Davido Martino
;):)Excellent. A simple haiku brings me to my knees. If you know what i mean, oh forget it.

Well done!
6/7/2003 c1 Needa S
Excellent piece...Do keep writing...
5/27/2003 c1 The Black Rider
You got it across perfectly with such few words. Excellent job.
5/26/2003 c1 lostinscotland
heh, i know that feeling. it comes more when i'm messing with my stupid math, though...

'course, back when i did attempt a guitar, i felt that way, too. rather distressing
5/26/2003 c1 Amme1212
Hee hee.. I really know how that feels like. So many times have a felt that feeling... a bit too many times in my opinion.. but that's life. Short and sweet, nice!
5/26/2003 c1 76CoolBeans18s
Gosh, I feel like this all the time when I play the flute. The feeling is very well convayed. Brilliant job!

~ CoolBeans18s
5/26/2003 c1 7Dark Hamadryad
Ineresting. Short but interesting.

5/26/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
I'm worse, I can't play at all though I own one! .
5/26/2003 c1 15Isay
Wow... I feel like that sometimes when I play the piano and I can't seem to get the notes right.

5/26/2003 c1 1Jimmy Jazz
Oh wow. Absolutely fantastic. Excellent, I could almost feel the frustration and... oh wow. Simply amazing.
5/25/2003 c1 62Twistedlyinsane
wow I feel like that all the time.^_^great poem.
5/25/2003 c1 41Erotic Antibiotic
I like this one, I want to see more! Haha, goodness.
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