
6/15/2013 c16 GreysonCour
Wow, what a magnificent story! Your writing pulled me in, your characters were fantastic, and the plot had good, unexpected twists. I really enjoyed it!
Wow, what a magnificent story! Your writing pulled me in, your characters were fantastic, and the plot had good, unexpected twists. I really enjoyed it!
12/1/2011 c7 Ariel
Hi! I was just wondering if this story was based on the book 'Queen of Camelot' by Nancy McKenzie?
Hi! I was just wondering if this story was based on the book 'Queen of Camelot' by Nancy McKenzie?
7/24/2011 c16 Non.graceful
You had me in tears. It truly was a great story!
You had me in tears. It truly was a great story!
7/24/2011 c2 non.graceful
Your main character is truly beautiful. You've captured this story in its essence.
By building up, by showing her each year as she grows, you are allowing us to connect to her.
Again, great job.
Your main character is truly beautiful. You've captured this story in its essence.
By building up, by showing her each year as she grows, you are allowing us to connect to her.
Again, great job.
7/24/2011 c1 non.graceful
Impressive.
It shared a variety of emotions which is needed in every story.
Great job!
It wasn't horrid.
Impressive.
It shared a variety of emotions which is needed in every story.
Great job!
It wasn't horrid.
10/19/2010 c16 starlight-angel88
WOW. Amazing story. I absolutely loved it, although I cried at the end when they both died.
Going to read the sequel now :)
WOW. Amazing story. I absolutely loved it, although I cried at the end when they both died.
Going to read the sequel now :)
4/25/2010 c8 jaja59
who did that to Eldoris? What dis just happen? OH my gosh. that's all i can say. Oh, i love Calandra. I still like Isidore, Hope he finds the right woman for him. and btw, where are the parents of Isidore and Feodor?
who did that to Eldoris? What dis just happen? OH my gosh. that's all i can say. Oh, i love Calandra. I still like Isidore, Hope he finds the right woman for him. and btw, where are the parents of Isidore and Feodor?
4/25/2010 c7 jaja59
What? No sons? that is a no no! Oh my gosh what would happen to Feodor in the battle. I really pity Isidore. Haixt.. on to the next chap.
What? No sons? that is a no no! Oh my gosh what would happen to Feodor in the battle. I really pity Isidore. Haixt.. on to the next chap.
4/25/2010 c6 jaja59
You know I don't know how to react. I love all the men in Eldoris' life. I don't know, whose side to take. Is it Isidore or Feodor? I really don't know.Well, I'm not expecting such an act from Feodor it's so cute, is that even the right term? I don't know. ON to the next chap
You know I don't know how to react. I love all the men in Eldoris' life. I don't know, whose side to take. Is it Isidore or Feodor? I really don't know.Well, I'm not expecting such an act from Feodor it's so cute, is that even the right term? I don't know. ON to the next chap
4/25/2010 c5 jaja59
WHAT? I thought this would be the time for Eldoris and Isidore to unite! Wah, i wanna cry! D*mn so evil w*tch Kalonice would get what she want? Oh no please?
WHAT? I thought this would be the time for Eldoris and Isidore to unite! Wah, i wanna cry! D*mn so evil w*tch Kalonice would get what she want? Oh no please?
4/25/2010 c3 jaja59
i really hate that b*tch Chloe and her wh*re daughter Kalonice. D*mn i so much wanted to kill them! :( [my nose are flaring in anger]
i really hate that b*tch Chloe and her wh*re daughter Kalonice. D*mn i so much wanted to kill them! :( [my nose are flaring in anger]