for War Freaks and Greeks: The Story of a HalfMortal2/9/2010 c2 
8innocent as far as you know
jeasus christ woman/man, random much? your main charactor is a freak!
8innocent as far as you knowjeasus christ woman/man, random much? your main charactor is a freak!
5/17/2007 c2 zakei
LOL? you know some writer's say that their personality shines through their works, so readers can actually get some insight on how they think and all that load of stuff? i can imagine what kind of a person you are now. *runs away* but keep writing!
LOL? you know some writer's say that their personality shines through their works, so readers can actually get some insight on how they think and all that load of stuff? i can imagine what kind of a person you are now. *runs away* but keep writing!
5/17/2007 c1 zakei
omgloliloveit. its so cliched of me. haha. but its a nice start, and its funny. very funny. Eros is a NERD? hahah. can't imagine. again. lolsy. keep writing! yes yes, i'm a broken tape recorder. i'd thought you knew it by now. tsky.
omgloliloveit. its so cliched of me. haha. but its a nice start, and its funny. very funny. Eros is a NERD? hahah. can't imagine. again. lolsy. keep writing! yes yes, i'm a broken tape recorder. i'd thought you knew it by now. tsky.
6/16/2006 c1 893834723923
I do believe I've gone insane for even replying to this, what should I care what you have to say? In all honesty you've made me curious, though you probably think I'm just a silly girl.
Yes, I have an email address: feel free to email me even though reviewers are probably getting a kick out of our conversation. I do apologize for calling you an ass, but it really does bother me when stranger (or older men) call me 'sweetie' or 'baby.'
I do believe I've gone insane for even replying to this, what should I care what you have to say? In all honesty you've made me curious, though you probably think I'm just a silly girl.
Yes, I have an email address: feel free to email me even though reviewers are probably getting a kick out of our conversation. I do apologize for calling you an ass, but it really does bother me when stranger (or older men) call me 'sweetie' or 'baby.'
6/10/2006 c2 2writergurlLW
you just have to continue this crazy story! that line abuot her not closing her legs fast enough was HILARIOUS. i have to save this into my favorites! your story is the first story to get saved into my favorites! it was that good.
2writergurlLWyou just have to continue this crazy story! that line abuot her not closing her legs fast enough was HILARIOUS. i have to save this into my favorites! your story is the first story to get saved into my favorites! it was that good.
2/2/2006 c1 9The Gobbler
Woot, this is awesome! Modern takes on Greek mythology are always fun to read. I like the way you explained the gods' passing out of the world, how no one pays attention to them anymore. I also liked Eros, and the sneakers at the end. Great job.
9The GobblerWoot, this is awesome! Modern takes on Greek mythology are always fun to read. I like the way you explained the gods' passing out of the world, how no one pays attention to them anymore. I also liked Eros, and the sneakers at the end. Great job.
8/19/2005 c2 20Pheobe Meryll
There seems to be a fad with bringing the Greek gods into modern life...as a nerdy Greek myself, I'm occasionally a little purist in these matters...but I couldn't help but laugh at your little twist. The daughter of Ares, about to kill the hapless mortal, stabbed in the back by Eros' arrow! Very nice. The humor, though, is a little over-the-top for me; I think you could have used more refined language especially in chapter one. I realize you are writing from the perspective of the character but it is just a little profane. Otherwise, your grammar is pretty good and your story is nicely orginized. Best luck!
PS I hope you don't mind me stating here but Butterfly may be continued soon...so thanks so much for your review!
20Pheobe MeryllThere seems to be a fad with bringing the Greek gods into modern life...as a nerdy Greek myself, I'm occasionally a little purist in these matters...but I couldn't help but laugh at your little twist. The daughter of Ares, about to kill the hapless mortal, stabbed in the back by Eros' arrow! Very nice. The humor, though, is a little over-the-top for me; I think you could have used more refined language especially in chapter one. I realize you are writing from the perspective of the character but it is just a little profane. Otherwise, your grammar is pretty good and your story is nicely orginized. Best luck!
PS I hope you don't mind me stating here but Butterfly may be continued soon...so thanks so much for your review!
12/7/2004 c2 vociferous
ok...this is seriously funny!& so light-hearted!it's totally different from Fox Trail!how on earth did you go from being so dramatic to so funny?you shouldn't put this on a hiatus!i've always loved stories w/ greek myths & this has great potential!(read night music yet?) pls continue on this too!
ok...this is seriously funny!& so light-hearted!it's totally different from Fox Trail!how on earth did you go from being so dramatic to so funny?you shouldn't put this on a hiatus!i've always loved stories w/ greek myths & this has great potential!(read night music yet?) pls continue on this too!
8/12/2004 c2 7darklycute
I absolutely love it! You have to continue it! Pwease! ~*grovels shamelessly*~
7darklycuteI absolutely love it! You have to continue it! Pwease! ~*grovels shamelessly*~
7/16/2004 c2 Cracked Circle
Blame my name for forcing me to stumble across this story. 0_o "The Circle", eh? Nice. (Cracked Circle, The Circle, yeah yeah.) *envious* 58 reviews for 2 chapters. It was funny though. *cough* TAKE IT OFF OF HIATUS. NOW!
Blame my name for forcing me to stumble across this story. 0_o "The Circle", eh? Nice. (Cracked Circle, The Circle, yeah yeah.) *envious* 58 reviews for 2 chapters. It was funny though. *cough* TAKE IT OFF OF HIATUS. NOW!
5/10/2004 c2 DeadSilentSaturn
Oh my gosh! I love this story! Interesting, original, and hilarious. Keep going.
Oh, by the way, did I tell you that my dad is none other than Ares, the god of war?
Some of my favorite lines:
Freak alarm going overdrive!
I take it back! I do not feel sad to eat alone! In fact, I love eating alone!
just continue looking at me like I’m a goddamn freak and you’ll know soon how a demi-god’s cornea tastes like…
Oh, and I love how you refer to your readers as "fellow psychopaths"
You know us too well.
Oh my gosh! I love this story! Interesting, original, and hilarious. Keep going.
Oh, by the way, did I tell you that my dad is none other than Ares, the god of war?
Some of my favorite lines:
Freak alarm going overdrive!
I take it back! I do not feel sad to eat alone! In fact, I love eating alone!
just continue looking at me like I’m a goddamn freak and you’ll know soon how a demi-god’s cornea tastes like…
Oh, and I love how you refer to your readers as "fellow psychopaths"
You know us too well.