for Sain5/27/2003 c1 
5R.C.Polk
Nice idea for a story, the biggest weakness is that the first chapter doesn't catch me that much, always nesscary. Good luck, nice story.
Future King of China,
R.C. Polk
5R.C.PolkNice idea for a story, the biggest weakness is that the first chapter doesn't catch me that much, always nesscary. Good luck, nice story.
Future King of China,
R.C. Polk
5/27/2003 c4 2NthNinth
interesting start. "The woman in white" reminds me of "the woman in red" from the matrix
2NthNinthinteresting start. "The woman in white" reminds me of "the woman in red" from the matrix
5/27/2003 c4 7Destin
cool ! Micheal Sain is so cool. Please write more. I hope this one day does become a comic book. I would buy it. Your writing more right ?
O and if you want , you don't have too but I want my story to become a anime. If you want you can read a story and tell me what you think.
Please update soon. I would be soo happy. O and if I have room , I'm putting you into my favorite authors. Sorry if I don't have room. If I don't I'll just look at the fantasy section to see if this is updated. Please update soon.
-Destin Scar
7Destincool ! Micheal Sain is so cool. Please write more. I hope this one day does become a comic book. I would buy it. Your writing more right ?
O and if you want , you don't have too but I want my story to become a anime. If you want you can read a story and tell me what you think.
Please update soon. I would be soo happy. O and if I have room , I'm putting you into my favorite authors. Sorry if I don't have room. If I don't I'll just look at the fantasy section to see if this is updated. Please update soon.
-Destin Scar