for Empty9/18/2003 c1 Julia
man o man publish all this greatness im telling you, you have no idea how many of us real people there are...
*jules*
man o man publish all this greatness im telling you, you have no idea how many of us real people there are...
*jules*
6/3/2003 c1 
64not sure yet
interesting and very dark, i love it lots, "the sun sinks/into a sea of blood/to soak in its own sin/reminded of the light(dark0..." ill just stop, love every single line, love the way it ends too, by the looks of it this poem seems like it would flow quickly but weirdly for me it went kinda slow, found that odd, anywayz, beautifully done
64not sure yetinteresting and very dark, i love it lots, "the sun sinks/into a sea of blood/to soak in its own sin/reminded of the light(dark0..." ill just stop, love every single line, love the way it ends too, by the looks of it this poem seems like it would flow quickly but weirdly for me it went kinda slow, found that odd, anywayz, beautifully done
6/2/2003 c1 74wonky donkey
This is good!
I like how you said~sinks into a sea of blood~ watching the sunset over the ocean really looks like that.
~to soak in its own sin~ (great line)
Cheers!
74wonky donkeyThis is good!
I like how you said~sinks into a sea of blood~ watching the sunset over the ocean really looks like that.
~to soak in its own sin~ (great line)
Cheers!
5/29/2003 c1 Darkangel Rose lazy bum that i am i dun wanna sign in
O.o
You so rock it has stopped being funny.
XD I love it. Imagery = perfect. You = perfect ... haven't we been over this before? You are the best!
O.o
You so rock it has stopped being funny.
XD I love it. Imagery = perfect. You = perfect ... haven't we been over this before? You are the best!