for Keep Breathing7/24/2006 c34 Saeto
RAR.
RAR.
1/1/2005 c1 
5senyaichiya
I really liked this story...I haven't been on in a while... but this one I thought was pretty awesome. nice.
5senyaichiyaI really liked this story...I haven't been on in a while... but this one I thought was pretty awesome. nice.
3/21/2004 c9 Jeyke
Susa sounds nice. Nice in a true way. Good chapter.
Susa sounds nice. Nice in a true way. Good chapter.
3/21/2004 c6 Jeyke
Brilliant! Extremely weird, but really good!
Brilliant! Extremely weird, but really good!
3/21/2004 c5 Jeyke
Yup, well... I keep to my original thoughts, he's off his head. Not so much because he mutiliates himself, but because he sees a vampire and decides to go back to sleep! No, wait a sec', he might be extremely hero-like. Yeah, that's probably it! Whatever! I like your story a great deal!
Yup, well... I keep to my original thoughts, he's off his head. Not so much because he mutiliates himself, but because he sees a vampire and decides to go back to sleep! No, wait a sec', he might be extremely hero-like. Yeah, that's probably it! Whatever! I like your story a great deal!
3/21/2004 c3 Jeyke
This is getting really good! I like how his wound healed so quickly... Is he human...?
This is getting really good! I like how his wound healed so quickly... Is he human...?
3/21/2004 c2 Jeyke
I was right! He's completely mad! Nah, just joking... Good story so far... Lot more than just vampire drivel...
I was right! He's completely mad! Nah, just joking... Good story so far... Lot more than just vampire drivel...
3/21/2004 c1 Jeyke
Is he mad?
I like the way you write, it has a nice twang to it. But I must admit I think he's crazy!
Is he mad?
I like the way you write, it has a nice twang to it. But I must admit I think he's crazy!
2/27/2004 c33 37Peachez 24
*smiles* So, Susa's gonna help Kali. Well at least we know he's not alone or something. After that blast and all I have to admit I was a little worried. Because even though people aren't supposed to kill of the main characters most of them do... *glares at Megan*. Ok... sorry about that. She does it all the time to the characters... I personally think it's just mean, but it does have it's uses sometimes. Anyway, keep writing and update soon!
Peachez ^_~
37Peachez 24*smiles* So, Susa's gonna help Kali. Well at least we know he's not alone or something. After that blast and all I have to admit I was a little worried. Because even though people aren't supposed to kill of the main characters most of them do... *glares at Megan*. Ok... sorry about that. She does it all the time to the characters... I personally think it's just mean, but it does have it's uses sometimes. Anyway, keep writing and update soon!
Peachez ^_~
12/15/2003 c32 Peachez 24
Poor kid... or would it be poor woman? That's quite a thing for a young boy to see. So now the maids are going to send the letter on to Rikiru, I just wonder what's in the note. Mind boggling to say the least. Keep writing and update soon!
Peachez ^_~
Poor kid... or would it be poor woman? That's quite a thing for a young boy to see. So now the maids are going to send the letter on to Rikiru, I just wonder what's in the note. Mind boggling to say the least. Keep writing and update soon!
Peachez ^_~
12/10/2003 c31 Peachez 24
Ah, connections... connections. I do believe I know who Grandmother is talking to, although I have no clue on his true reaction or plan. I know this chapter has certainly spiked an interest in me. The first appearance of a character often does. Well, keep writing and update soon!
Peachez ^_~
Ah, connections... connections. I do believe I know who Grandmother is talking to, although I have no clue on his true reaction or plan. I know this chapter has certainly spiked an interest in me. The first appearance of a character often does. Well, keep writing and update soon!
Peachez ^_~
10/27/2003 c30 6Tamaku Songi
This story is Awesome! (alittle confusing, but i think u wanted that;) I cant wait for u to post more
6Tamaku SongiThis story is Awesome! (alittle confusing, but i think u wanted that;) I cant wait for u to post more
10/26/2003 c30 Estriel
Yay! I like it when Kagetsu and Sasha are near each other- it always seems to get more amusing then! This chapter was as good as always, content wise, and intriguing in the addition of the restaurant; the name of which I love. I've been thikikng about the characters, and Sasha is still my fave, but he should wear silk. I don't know why, but I get a really strong impression of him wearing silk and faded velvet. That has to be a good thing- that I have so strong an impression of your character that I'm thinkikng about how they dress. About how old is Kali? Because I always imagine him at about eleven/twelve. Hm. I also think your story should carry a 'highly addictive' warning, and you should warn new readers that they will need enough time to read this constantly through to the end, because I have re-read, and it is really, really hard to stop between chapters!
Yay! I like it when Kagetsu and Sasha are near each other- it always seems to get more amusing then! This chapter was as good as always, content wise, and intriguing in the addition of the restaurant; the name of which I love. I've been thikikng about the characters, and Sasha is still my fave, but he should wear silk. I don't know why, but I get a really strong impression of him wearing silk and faded velvet. That has to be a good thing- that I have so strong an impression of your character that I'm thinkikng about how they dress. About how old is Kali? Because I always imagine him at about eleven/twelve. Hm. I also think your story should carry a 'highly addictive' warning, and you should warn new readers that they will need enough time to read this constantly through to the end, because I have re-read, and it is really, really hard to stop between chapters!
10/26/2003 c29 Estriel
Now I like that ending. Very dramatic, very 'suspenseful' and an excellent way to make me go read the next chapter!
Sorry I haven't been a better reviewer- Glandular fever confines me to bed, which is exceedingly boring in the worst way. I also liked the way you descridbed Kiru's memory of the bloke being shot- the blood was particularly vivid. See ya next chapter!
Now I like that ending. Very dramatic, very 'suspenseful' and an excellent way to make me go read the next chapter!
Sorry I haven't been a better reviewer- Glandular fever confines me to bed, which is exceedingly boring in the worst way. I also liked the way you descridbed Kiru's memory of the bloke being shot- the blood was particularly vivid. See ya next chapter!
10/26/2003 c30 37Peachez 24
Aw! How sweet. *chuckels* Pirates Rock! No problem... o, more info... *chuckles* Hey... I'll accept that very contently lol. ^-^
They meet again! Hm... quite the restarautn. OMG! Kagetsu isn't wearing his outfit no more? *pouts* But that was the best! lol, Then again, I'm a gurl, and you wouldn't be able to get me to go around in a skirt or dress that long either. Keep writing and update soon!
Peachez ^_~
37Peachez 24Aw! How sweet. *chuckels* Pirates Rock! No problem... o, more info... *chuckles* Hey... I'll accept that very contently lol. ^-^
They meet again! Hm... quite the restarautn. OMG! Kagetsu isn't wearing his outfit no more? *pouts* But that was the best! lol, Then again, I'm a gurl, and you wouldn't be able to get me to go around in a skirt or dress that long either. Keep writing and update soon!
Peachez ^_~