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7/30/2003 c1 19AlahanTao
Hey, good poem.

'not hardly there' is just a little confusing.

Caught your review of my "Judgement day", more chapters coming soon. It is good to find a fellow Christian on such a (at times) secular site.

Keep shining the light!
7/21/2003 c1 5ChildOfGod07
This is the third poem of yours I've read, and it's the third one I've liked. I like the messages you put in them more than anything. Keep it up...

Amy :)
5/30/2003 c1 25az2328
I liked this, though I didn't really understand why you used 'not hardly there'. but then again, i'm easily disoriented (oh why did i take the red pill?)

other than that and the second last line, i liked the sentiment and empathise. walk towards the light!:)
5/28/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
Bravo! I liked that last line the best.

~Heart of the Sword

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