
1/11/2004 c1
28frugale
That's very interesting ... I love the pleonasm in the last line, and the french word... :3

That's very interesting ... I love the pleonasm in the last line, and the french word... :3
9/17/2003 c1
96AutumnRhapsody
Wow...cool. I love how you put rendez-vous in there, and the italics. Great wording.

Wow...cool. I love how you put rendez-vous in there, and the italics. Great wording.
7/17/2003 c1
80Plato's Optic Runaway
eek, are you good. i fear if i keep reviewing they might become mindless, repetative praise...but that can be a good thing. ^^

eek, are you good. i fear if i keep reviewing they might become mindless, repetative praise...but that can be a good thing. ^^
7/4/2003 c1 lainxauber
Great job. The essence of your poems are so broad, you can take them to mean more than one thing. I love it!
Great job. The essence of your poems are so broad, you can take them to mean more than one thing. I love it!
7/1/2003 c1
17Winged One1
this is beautiful...i'd love to be able to write haikus...but I can never do anything short and sweet *laughs*
winged one

this is beautiful...i'd love to be able to write haikus...but I can never do anything short and sweet *laughs*
winged one
6/29/2003 c1
89Stoffpferd
Oh my God, this is so great! Especially the last line "Rendezvous, we meet..." ...amazing! o.O
~Stoffpferd~

Oh my God, this is so great! Especially the last line "Rendezvous, we meet..." ...amazing! o.O
~Stoffpferd~