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6/1/2003 c1 128Zainab
The first line is very nice.
5/30/2003 c1 Kyalia
Meditative, sort of... good.
5/30/2003 c1 Needa S
I like the depth you created in this piece. Awesome job!
5/30/2003 c1 76CoolBeans18s
Haunting, dreamlike, wow! Great job!

~ CoolBeans18s
5/30/2003 c1 42Lady of the Moon
I love the idea behind this haiku. The first line is my favorite, definitely. Dots at the end are very good.

Asta Chantrea Orra
5/30/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
sounds nice. good job on all these haiku. keep it up!
5/29/2003 c1 8glitterjewele
wow, very interesting . . . it actually made me think (and i'm brain-dead right now, so that's saying something :P). okay, i don't know why exactly, but the italicized 'rendevous' is mystifying me . . . i'm entranced or something. it's like a grand flourish, it makes the 'r' roll eloquently in my brain. really, i'm getting this vision of the first encounter of two soul mates, which is absolutely awesome. like it muchly. great job!
5/29/2003 c1 64not sure yet
oo, interesting and very kool, enjoyed this muchly, excellent job
5/29/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
Darkly beautiful.

~Heart of the Sword
5/29/2003 c1 The Black Rider
A hauntingly beautiful piece that will surely stick with me for quite a while.

BTW, I'm feeling a bit better now, but thank you for asking, that was very kind of you. It's people like you that can cure any illnesses.
5/29/2003 c1 51Lieschen
Delightful, dreamlike and beautiful. Keep writing, you have so much talent.

ELise
5/29/2003 c1 267Lady B.V Rose
wowzers! Like just...wow *can't find her dictionary - not like it helps never find good enough words for stuff like this* *cookie*

"HiDe Me FrOm ThE pAddyS!" - Me

x Nicole x
5/29/2003 c1 greenfroggies
i really like it. Short but sweet.
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