for Transparent and real10/30/2003 c1 
19Anagronax
Aha! The social cameleon! Aren't we all like that, afraid to show our true self, because we fear rejection. There is nothing worse than being rejected from a group, any group.
I really like the fourth stanza... Can't quite put into words why I like it, but I do. Kudos to ya.
19AnagronaxAha! The social cameleon! Aren't we all like that, afraid to show our true self, because we fear rejection. There is nothing worse than being rejected from a group, any group.
I really like the fourth stanza... Can't quite put into words why I like it, but I do. Kudos to ya.
6/15/2003 c1 156Jazzista
you tackle a complex subject with meaningful simplicity. nice images. you show us what it means to be real. nice work.
156Jazzistayou tackle a complex subject with meaningful simplicity. nice images. you show us what it means to be real. nice work.
5/30/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
This was a masterpiece. The last two lines were the best.
~Heart of the Sword
100Keep it 100This was a masterpiece. The last two lines were the best.
~Heart of the Sword
5/30/2003 c1 106cosmo-queen
This is very good, it's very deep and thought=provoking. I loved the final three stanzas. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenThis is very good, it's very deep and thought=provoking. I loved the final three stanzas. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*