for I Want to Laugh and Cry at the Same Time4/22/2004 c1 Joan of Arc
Oh my goodness; I love this...
Oh my goodness; I love this...
12/31/2003 c1 
7Tainted Tears
Dig the poem, nice touch. I get those daydreaming times too.
I envy your poem writing skills. I can't write a compassionate poem if it was to save my life. I can only write good poems when I'm a bit hung-over something and bad, which doesn't happen too often.
Great poem!
-Tears of a Lonely Soul
7Tainted TearsDig the poem, nice touch. I get those daydreaming times too.
I envy your poem writing skills. I can't write a compassionate poem if it was to save my life. I can only write good poems when I'm a bit hung-over something and bad, which doesn't happen too often.
Great poem!
-Tears of a Lonely Soul
12/11/2003 c1 The Forsaken One
Pretty good. But too light for my tastes.
Pretty good. But too light for my tastes.
9/26/2003 c1 Libby Ann
I simply love this poem. You are a true poet; a true patron of poetry. The rhyming pattern was lovely, but that wasn't what I loved most about it. What really touched me was the fact that you took the time to look out your window and observe the beauty at a time when nobody appreciates anything anymore. You are a really descriptive writer. Everything was clear, and I could picture all that you had seen. I especially loved all the figurative language that you used especially the part about the sunset. "Like an intricate pattern I couldn't possibly sew..." If I had an account on this site, I would add you onto my favorties list, but I'm only eleven. Oh well, excellent work.
I simply love this poem. You are a true poet; a true patron of poetry. The rhyming pattern was lovely, but that wasn't what I loved most about it. What really touched me was the fact that you took the time to look out your window and observe the beauty at a time when nobody appreciates anything anymore. You are a really descriptive writer. Everything was clear, and I could picture all that you had seen. I especially loved all the figurative language that you used especially the part about the sunset. "Like an intricate pattern I couldn't possibly sew..." If I had an account on this site, I would add you onto my favorties list, but I'm only eleven. Oh well, excellent work.
8/2/2003 c1 4ColorCrayons
o that was amazing! i loved it! its so true, too, especially that last line. wow. i dont know what to say...okay, i do (im very rarely stunned from words!...never, actually) great job on this!
~color outside the lines~
4ColorCrayonso that was amazing! i loved it! its so true, too, especially that last line. wow. i dont know what to say...okay, i do (im very rarely stunned from words!...never, actually) great job on this!
~color outside the lines~
7/28/2003 c1 32Byrdde
Wonderful work. The descriptions are vivid and the current under the words carried me along all the way through. You've deffinitly made my favorite author list.
Valé
32ByrddeWonderful work. The descriptions are vivid and the current under the words carried me along all the way through. You've deffinitly made my favorite author list.
Valé
7/28/2003 c1 1Pirouette
Hey. Your poem has quite a way of expressing things, i think it's great and that you should keep it up.
1PirouetteHey. Your poem has quite a way of expressing things, i think it's great and that you should keep it up.
7/28/2003 c1 Antonia
Excellent poem! I really love this. Good job.
Excellent poem! I really love this. Good job.
7/25/2003 c1 13StarlightWarrior
Very good! The rhyme scheme in particular is very nice.
As to how to define Gothic fiction. . . hmm. That's hard. Pretty much old- style and rather classy kind of horror. Poe, Dracula, that kind of stuff. And that's just the most obvious. . .
Thanks for reviewing my poems, by the way. And y'know, my mom doesn't even know that I post here. =)
13StarlightWarriorVery good! The rhyme scheme in particular is very nice.
As to how to define Gothic fiction. . . hmm. That's hard. Pretty much old- style and rather classy kind of horror. Poe, Dracula, that kind of stuff. And that's just the most obvious. . .
Thanks for reviewing my poems, by the way. And y'know, my mom doesn't even know that I post here. =)
7/22/2003 c1 Roberta Pryce Robinson
I liked your poem! It gave the feel & sense of the wonder off it all! Nicely done! It left me feeling, happier, just to read it!
I liked your poem! It gave the feel & sense of the wonder off it all! Nicely done! It left me feeling, happier, just to read it!
7/22/2003 c1 Kushinadahime
Wow, that was a great poem. It seems to be filled with so many emotions. I think that's what makes it so great. Keep up with the good work.
Wow, that was a great poem. It seems to be filled with so many emotions. I think that's what makes it so great. Keep up with the good work.
7/16/2003 c1 Elizabeth
I really like this poem. I saw on Warm-Tape's biography that I should read your poetry. I can see what she means. I like the way you rhyme things. I mean, I can't rhyme. And I like the way you use similes and you're able to paint pictures in my mind. Good job!
I really like this poem. I saw on Warm-Tape's biography that I should read your poetry. I can see what she means. I like the way you rhyme things. I mean, I can't rhyme. And I like the way you use similes and you're able to paint pictures in my mind. Good job!
7/16/2003 c1 10Warm-Tape
I love you! I absolutely love you. Your imagery and words are perfect; expressing things in a simple but beautiful manner. want to laugh and cry at the same time.
10Warm-TapeI love you! I absolutely love you. Your imagery and words are perfect; expressing things in a simple but beautiful manner. want to laugh and cry at the same time.
7/8/2003 c1 Roses and Wine
This poem is extremely beautiful, reflective and detailed. Your an excellent writer, keep up the good work! I hope u can review some of my work, too, thanks!
This poem is extremely beautiful, reflective and detailed. Your an excellent writer, keep up the good work! I hope u can review some of my work, too, thanks!