for Life in general4/2/2004 c2 
127Eirien
Lovely. You manage to get across so many of the countless aspects of the beauty of Jesus. This is powerful, and he really seems to have anointed you with a great gift of writing as well as insight into his love.
Good job, keep writing for him! :-)
Love,
* Eirien
127EirienLovely. You manage to get across so many of the countless aspects of the beauty of Jesus. This is powerful, and he really seems to have anointed you with a great gift of writing as well as insight into his love.
Good job, keep writing for him! :-)
Love,
* Eirien
2/20/2004 c6 138Lina Inverse
Very touching. It takes a lot of strength to be a soldier... and a lot of indifference to force this reality on someone.
138Lina InverseVery touching. It takes a lot of strength to be a soldier... and a lot of indifference to force this reality on someone.
1/26/2004 c51 148JJR Meerraf
Very good, very noble, true, coragious in a way, I don't know... it was just a truly excellent poem.
148JJR MeerrafVery good, very noble, true, coragious in a way, I don't know... it was just a truly excellent poem.
1/26/2004 c49 JJR Meerraf
I'm sorry you had a bad day :(. It inspired a heart felt and exquisite poem though! Wonderful!
I'm sorry you had a bad day :(. It inspired a heart felt and exquisite poem though! Wonderful!
1/26/2004 c48 JJR Meerraf
Ack! I feel terrible! Here you are giving me the most reviews I've had in my life! Maybe three times as more! And I haven't reviewed you for what seems like forever and a day! I'm SO sorry! I've been so busy!
The poem made sense to me, and as always it was excellent! I loved it!
Ack! I feel terrible! Here you are giving me the most reviews I've had in my life! Maybe three times as more! And I haven't reviewed you for what seems like forever and a day! I'm SO sorry! I've been so busy!
The poem made sense to me, and as always it was excellent! I loved it!
1/22/2004 c47 JJR Meerraf
This is the... third maybe storm poem, but it never gets old, it's a wonderful subject and you do it masterfully each time. I loved it! It's wonderful!
P.S.
Thanks for so many reviews! I truly consider myself blessed to know you and be able to read your work. I feel blessed and just... wonderful with all your reviews, that KEEP coming in! You're a great friend! Thank you!
This is the... third maybe storm poem, but it never gets old, it's a wonderful subject and you do it masterfully each time. I loved it! It's wonderful!
P.S.
Thanks for so many reviews! I truly consider myself blessed to know you and be able to read your work. I feel blessed and just... wonderful with all your reviews, that KEEP coming in! You're a great friend! Thank you!
1/22/2004 c45 JJR Meerraf
This is very good! I've gone through some tough times just recently and thinking like that and talking to God has really helped me out. It just brought back a very good point that we all need to rmemeber. Marvelous work!
This is very good! I've gone through some tough times just recently and thinking like that and talking to God has really helped me out. It just brought back a very good point that we all need to rmemeber. Marvelous work!
1/22/2004 c42 JJR Meerraf
Oh! I love that song! It's like one of the greatest songs! Meant To Live by Switchfoot was excellent also! I love the guitar! sorry, but music and writing are my only release in this world, and when I get started it's hard to stop.
I loved the repatition. And though it was similar to the song it was also unique in its own way. A wonderful piece of writing.
Oh! I love that song! It's like one of the greatest songs! Meant To Live by Switchfoot was excellent also! I love the guitar! sorry, but music and writing are my only release in this world, and when I get started it's hard to stop.
I loved the repatition. And though it was similar to the song it was also unique in its own way. A wonderful piece of writing.
1/22/2004 c41 JJR Meerraf
Excellent, wonderful, beautiful. I loved the very beginning, and the rest of the haiku was marvelous also! I like some of Third Days songs, I usually like more hard rock sort of stuff, but still an excellent place to find insp0iration. I loved it!
Excellent, wonderful, beautiful. I loved the very beginning, and the rest of the haiku was marvelous also! I like some of Third Days songs, I usually like more hard rock sort of stuff, but still an excellent place to find insp0iration. I loved it!
1/22/2004 c40 JJR Meerraf
Very cool! Maybe one of my favorites. I loved how you pointed out that you're going on an adventure but it also means leaving your comfort zone. Wonderful stuff! Again! Please don't get annoyed at hearing that :), it's just true! Beautiful!
Very cool! Maybe one of my favorites. I loved how you pointed out that you're going on an adventure but it also means leaving your comfort zone. Wonderful stuff! Again! Please don't get annoyed at hearing that :), it's just true! Beautiful!