
6/12/2003 c1
80Plato's Optic Runaway
oh, so very touching and spiritual...ack, i love your work! heh, you changed your name...but your email address still makes me laugh every time i read it...good job. not too long for me, considering what i write...ah well. neh, keep it up...

oh, so very touching and spiritual...ack, i love your work! heh, you changed your name...but your email address still makes me laugh every time i read it...good job. not too long for me, considering what i write...ah well. neh, keep it up...
6/7/2003 c1
7disheartenedwolf
Long poem, short pharases though.
Very nice, and I must say it does have a beat to it. Keep up the good work.

Long poem, short pharases though.
Very nice, and I must say it does have a beat to it. Keep up the good work.
6/2/2003 c1
3dont mind me
hi jamie who is 5'6''!
this one is kind of optimistic and i like that. not optimistic like "the world is pink and fluffy" but optimistic in that it recognizes that there are problems but that perhaps there are ways that we can get through them, whether it is through faith or something else. it is a little hopeful but kind of bittersweet. good work.

hi jamie who is 5'6''!
this one is kind of optimistic and i like that. not optimistic like "the world is pink and fluffy" but optimistic in that it recognizes that there are problems but that perhaps there are ways that we can get through them, whether it is through faith or something else. it is a little hopeful but kind of bittersweet. good work.
5/31/2003 c1 bee
I love it, Its really shows what people like us (teens) go through... Keep writing
I love it, Its really shows what people like us (teens) go through... Keep writing