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10/26/2004 c1 16End Of Trend
Oh it wasn't THAT bad... well... when compared to the masterpieces you write now... yeah it's bad but it wasn't that bad!
5/31/2003 c1 35Blooming Phoenix
Beautiful imagery, reminds me alot about what I'm thinking as well. keep writing more! I should really read your other works now! Check out my poems while your at it.
5/31/2003 c1 1Loveliveshere
first i would like to say welcome to the world that i have known for almost a year now! hehe, anyway...very nice, are you trying to rhyme or not? some parts don't, but then other parts do..bit confusing there..."and there is no one to deny, that i belong, in the outskirts of the sky" BLAH...i personally don't like that part, it doesn't fit in at all..but besides, i liked this one. very interesting message you conveyed...bravo
5/31/2003 c1 endless040
Nice poem, powerful and peaceful at the same time. Nice
5/31/2003 c1 Tusaki Hibiki
Hee! I agree with blinkie
5/31/2003 c1 2blinkie
wow! that was really exhilirating to read! ^_^

reminded me of dream theater.

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