for Outskirts of the sky10/26/2004 c1 
16End Of Trend
Oh it wasn't THAT bad... well... when compared to the masterpieces you write now... yeah it's bad but it wasn't that bad!
16End Of TrendOh it wasn't THAT bad... well... when compared to the masterpieces you write now... yeah it's bad but it wasn't that bad!
5/31/2003 c1 35Blooming Phoenix
Beautiful imagery, reminds me alot about what I'm thinking as well. keep writing more! I should really read your other works now! Check out my poems while your at it.
35Blooming PhoenixBeautiful imagery, reminds me alot about what I'm thinking as well. keep writing more! I should really read your other works now! Check out my poems while your at it.
5/31/2003 c1 1Loveliveshere
first i would like to say welcome to the world that i have known for almost a year now! hehe, anyway...very nice, are you trying to rhyme or not? some parts don't, but then other parts do..bit confusing there..."and there is no one to deny, that i belong, in the outskirts of the sky" BLAH...i personally don't like that part, it doesn't fit in at all..but besides, i liked this one. very interesting message you conveyed...bravo
1Lovelivesherefirst i would like to say welcome to the world that i have known for almost a year now! hehe, anyway...very nice, are you trying to rhyme or not? some parts don't, but then other parts do..bit confusing there..."and there is no one to deny, that i belong, in the outskirts of the sky" BLAH...i personally don't like that part, it doesn't fit in at all..but besides, i liked this one. very interesting message you conveyed...bravo
5/31/2003 c1 Tusaki Hibiki
Hee! I agree with blinkie
Hee! I agree with blinkie