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5/17/2004 c1 Flamer
If's I have my head in my ass, then yours has already made several round trips up and around.
4/30/2004 c1 285KittenX
To Dear Flamer,
I would advise you to get your head out of your ass before you suffocate.
6/25/2003 c1 210Kelpylion
God, that's beautiful.
6/5/2003 c1 8Pierced
I loved the beginning... very visual- I could really see "her"... but I honestly thought the ending was a bit cliche. Hard to avoid nowadays though. On the whole a very intriguing cool poem.
5/31/2003 c1 35Blooming Phoenix
Sad, but it makes aot of sense to me, like when you meet a friend and they think you really don't know how they feel, I think about my friends even when I'm right with them, though I haven't seen them in a long time. Memories, very descriptive and a very sad but important ending, it shows that we all our kind of lost and lonely and tired of all of these complicatng questions ringing inside of our heads. Anyways, keep writing!

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