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5/31/2003 c1 34Smoky Bear
i'm so glad i decided to read your stuff dude... that was fabulous...
5/31/2003 c1 firess
that was really goodly. it reminded me of a poem i wrote about a month ago called alone. u should read it and c watcha thinks.
5/31/2003 c1 8revengedemon
I especially like the line "And what's left will rise above all"
5/31/2003 c1 2blinkie
wow...that was AMAZING. I especially liked these lines:

"And what's left will rise above all

Undermine the holy prayer

And my soul, a vessel

Floating,

In the magma of existence"

Though it's tragic, it's beautifully written. You're amazing!

blinkie

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