for Rebirth of the Heart9/8/2004 c14 
6Goldensong
*sobs* Will read your sequel shortly! I love these two so much! I thought the first one was better though. This one still rocks! Go you!
6Goldensong*sobs* Will read your sequel shortly! I love these two so much! I thought the first one was better though. This one still rocks! Go you!
8/2/2004 c5 Namishka
um...Shiyue Shinriyue sounds more japanese. but anyway...you're the writer, it's not my oppinion that counts. you got some spelling problems. you might want to reread and edit it properly so as to allow proper reading and understanding of it.
um...Shiyue Shinriyue sounds more japanese. but anyway...you're the writer, it's not my oppinion that counts. you got some spelling problems. you might want to reread and edit it properly so as to allow proper reading and understanding of it.
3/6/2004 c5 just me
Hey, you are a really great writer! If you could send me the address for your web comic and that pic that you drew of Shiyue and Kenri that would be great. Thanks! My address is Thanks again! I really appreciate it. If you can't do it I fully understand. Ok, bye.
Hey, you are a really great writer! If you could send me the address for your web comic and that pic that you drew of Shiyue and Kenri that would be great. Thanks! My address is Thanks again! I really appreciate it. If you can't do it I fully understand. Ok, bye.
7/31/2003 c9 Dodo Island
Sorry I haven't reviewed this story yet... I read it and the other one over the past few days. They're good. Shiyue is a lot like my friend Alex... they both repeat things when they're hungry or exited... except, when Alex is hungry, she pokes someone repeatedly in the side and says 'HUNGRY! HUNGRY! HUNGRY! ...' with each poke.
Sorry I haven't reviewed this story yet... I read it and the other one over the past few days. They're good. Shiyue is a lot like my friend Alex... they both repeat things when they're hungry or exited... except, when Alex is hungry, she pokes someone repeatedly in the side and says 'HUNGRY! HUNGRY! HUNGRY! ...' with each poke.
6/26/2003 c13 Jess
GOOD SAVE!
GOOD SAVE!
6/24/2003 c12 Jess
HE BETTER NOT! DIE :-(
HE BETTER NOT! DIE :-(
6/18/2003 c9 28GoldenTears
YAY! I loved this chapter! ((Wiggles eyebrows)) I can't wait to read more, but i'm gonna be gone for a week, so I wont get to review for a while! But, keep updating!
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28GoldenTearsYAY! I loved this chapter! ((Wiggles eyebrows)) I can't wait to read more, but i'm gonna be gone for a week, so I wont get to review for a while! But, keep updating!
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6/17/2003 c9 Jess
Aw...HOW CUTE!
Aw...HOW CUTE!
6/13/2003 c8 GoldenTears
Me: Aww!
Inner me: You can say that again.
ME: AWW!
Inner me: ((rolls eyes))
Me: It's about time too!
Inner me: I'll say!
Me: UPDATE SOON!
Inner Me: I LOVED IT!
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Me: Aww!
Inner me: You can say that again.
ME: AWW!
Inner me: ((rolls eyes))
Me: It's about time too!
Inner me: I'll say!
Me: UPDATE SOON!
Inner Me: I LOVED IT!
-GoldenTears-
6/13/2003 c7 GoldenTears
Yay! Another chapter finished! Gee, everone with all these great stories...((sigh))...It's heaven you know! lol. UPDATE SOON!
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Yay! Another chapter finished! Gee, everone with all these great stories...((sigh))...It's heaven you know! lol. UPDATE SOON!
-GoldenTears-