for Radical Blades3/29/2005 c4 
39Dahlia Wolffe
Cool. I like it. You REALLY know your stuff with the names of everything, and another reason to read your stuff. I actually learned something new today! *claps like a dork*-Yin
39Dahlia WolffeCool. I like it. You REALLY know your stuff with the names of everything, and another reason to read your stuff. I actually learned something new today! *claps like a dork*-Yin
3/29/2005 c3 Dahlia Wolffe
This is good. I like that this is more about the story than the martial arts- that it could be a story without it. That's good. Another great chapter.-Yin
This is good. I like that this is more about the story than the martial arts- that it could be a story without it. That's good. Another great chapter.-Yin
3/29/2005 c2 Dahlia Wolffe
This is good. The bottom stuff helps. I used to do that in my kabuki stories but i stopped after a while. I know my vocab and anyone who reads manga should as well. But if they don't it's helpful. Good work buddy. *pats on back*-Yin
This is good. The bottom stuff helps. I used to do that in my kabuki stories but i stopped after a while. I know my vocab and anyone who reads manga should as well. But if they don't it's helpful. Good work buddy. *pats on back*-Yin
3/29/2005 c1 Dahlia Wolffe
This is good. Wonderful. Could you please check out and give me feedback for this story "My Sword My Death"- cause I need help getting something more than airy description. I'm only asking for a review for CC Cause I haven't gotten any and I think my work suffers for it.-Yin
This is good. Wonderful. Could you please check out and give me feedback for this story "My Sword My Death"- cause I need help getting something more than airy description. I'm only asking for a review for CC Cause I haven't gotten any and I think my work suffers for it.-Yin
2/16/2005 c4 12Lissa
It's been a long time since you've last updated this, I know, but I sorely wish you would... This is a beautiful story and I just an't wait tos ee where it'll go next.
12LissaIt's been a long time since you've last updated this, I know, but I sorely wish you would... This is a beautiful story and I just an't wait tos ee where it'll go next.
11/22/2003 c1 5Naja Copperleaf
I like the description in this. I suppose we'll find out more about her mental instability later, yes? ;)
5Naja CopperleafI like the description in this. I suppose we'll find out more about her mental instability later, yes? ;)
9/10/2003 c4 I am Gone
This is great.I love all the imagery and the fact that you try to use your own vocabulary.Very imagnitive.
This is great.I love all the imagery and the fact that you try to use your own vocabulary.Very imagnitive.
6/24/2003 c4 DestroyerDemon22
Guess who's back for another review ^_^!
First off, I'd like to give kudos on bringing Kenshin into this great manga. I myself am a HUGE Kenshin fan, and noticed the beginning flashback right away. I hope you keep using little snip-bits of other animes as well, you really can't hurt a good anime with this manga. -_O
Secondly, I applaud the transmission between Kenshin and originality. It is pretty rare, in a type of anime like this anyways, for the main character to go off on adventures alone. This is something that is always hard to do, so it's not seen often, however you seemed to do this flawlessy. Very nice!
Thirdly, besides a few messed up sentences that were probably just typos, I see that you are paying more attention to detail and making less spelling and grammar mistakes. Also, it doesn't matter if you speak Japanese, you are using very good use of the language and Japanese vocabulary.
Lastly, (this is getting long) I especially like the flashbacks, and I can definately tell with the way that you described Sen'ei being so troubled, we're going to be seeing quite a few until she has calmed down a bit. This was also very well done, and I hope that these things, along with the rest of your talent in writing, continue to get better and better, as I am seeing every time you write a new chapter. This is your biggest fan -_O signing off for now!
~Timo
Guess who's back for another review ^_^!
First off, I'd like to give kudos on bringing Kenshin into this great manga. I myself am a HUGE Kenshin fan, and noticed the beginning flashback right away. I hope you keep using little snip-bits of other animes as well, you really can't hurt a good anime with this manga. -_O
Secondly, I applaud the transmission between Kenshin and originality. It is pretty rare, in a type of anime like this anyways, for the main character to go off on adventures alone. This is something that is always hard to do, so it's not seen often, however you seemed to do this flawlessy. Very nice!
Thirdly, besides a few messed up sentences that were probably just typos, I see that you are paying more attention to detail and making less spelling and grammar mistakes. Also, it doesn't matter if you speak Japanese, you are using very good use of the language and Japanese vocabulary.
Lastly, (this is getting long) I especially like the flashbacks, and I can definately tell with the way that you described Sen'ei being so troubled, we're going to be seeing quite a few until she has calmed down a bit. This was also very well done, and I hope that these things, along with the rest of your talent in writing, continue to get better and better, as I am seeing every time you write a new chapter. This is your biggest fan -_O signing off for now!
~Timo
6/14/2003 c3 4Anime-God
You never fail to impress me Ghost. You're definately putting some loose strings together and using what you have to you're advantage. This chapter was very good, all I can say is I Want More! Heh. I can't wait to see what you come up with next chapter. Until then, byez!
4Anime-GodYou never fail to impress me Ghost. You're definately putting some loose strings together and using what you have to you're advantage. This chapter was very good, all I can say is I Want More! Heh. I can't wait to see what you come up with next chapter. Until then, byez!
6/13/2003 c1 11Aero-Rhapsody
OOh pretty! But why do you think that originality is overrated? i like it and it seems original enough to me. Like the language, and i enjoy the sense of a parting understanding of the current scene. in other words, you dont reveal everything at once, you leave a sense of mystery. And its bloody! :)
Oh, and one more thing, HER LINES AT THE END. THIS MAKES A LOT MORE SENSE AND IS MORE FLUENT THAN SHOWS ON FOX.
11Aero-RhapsodyOOh pretty! But why do you think that originality is overrated? i like it and it seems original enough to me. Like the language, and i enjoy the sense of a parting understanding of the current scene. in other words, you dont reveal everything at once, you leave a sense of mystery. And its bloody! :)
Oh, and one more thing, HER LINES AT THE END. THIS MAKES A LOT MORE SENSE AND IS MORE FLUENT THAN SHOWS ON FOX.
6/6/2003 c2 129TetsuoTsubushi
I like it. The characters are great, and the mystery behind Sen'ei, and Ganji. I can't wait to find that out.
129TetsuoTsubushiI like it. The characters are great, and the mystery behind Sen'ei, and Ganji. I can't wait to find that out.