8/18/2003 c164not sure yet dark, if slightly cliche', still fairly well written with an excellent flow, nicely done
7/3/2003 c146scarywhenhyper well written and at the same tiome so very sad.
5/31/2003 c125az2328 This is really nice. i especially like 'crimson kiss of razored bliss'. though the sudden cropping up of period words was kinda i dunno- out of place?:)
5/31/2003 c118A i E r A very powerful imagery! very well written! i liked it a lot! good job! ^_^