for A Lie that Kills5/6/2005 c1 
24Malevolent-Plushie
Very True on this poem. Sadly, I smoke. I plan to quit though. Sorry about your Aunt Dying.
24Malevolent-PlushieVery True on this poem. Sadly, I smoke. I plan to quit though. Sorry about your Aunt Dying.
2/28/2005 c1 12BlakLace
well, thats one way to keep the cars' moving. Life is just that way and it introduces so many ugly things to us but we just have to go on and try to stop it. There are more bad horrible things in the world other then smoking
12BlakLacewell, thats one way to keep the cars' moving. Life is just that way and it introduces so many ugly things to us but we just have to go on and try to stop it. There are more bad horrible things in the world other then smoking
6/21/2004 c1 14arbysauce93
Very nice. I like it, it's kind of like the Truth commercials. I think they do a good job. THe truth hurts, and you made it hurt. Great poem.
14arbysauce93Very nice. I like it, it's kind of like the Truth commercials. I think they do a good job. THe truth hurts, and you made it hurt. Great poem.
5/30/2004 c1 RobynD
hi!
me again. been awhile since i've explored fictionpress so i thought i'd take a gander at what new has been posted or missed my glance last time. ;)
as always, huge fan of your work. Especially this one. considering sending it to my mom since she smokes and complains that i badger her too much about quitting. my philosophy is that if i don't, who will? And if no one will, who will they have left to badger?
but being familiar with my writing, you probably already know my fascination with death.
anywho, gotta go do some more reviews. later.
later,
luv bells
hi!
me again. been awhile since i've explored fictionpress so i thought i'd take a gander at what new has been posted or missed my glance last time. ;)
as always, huge fan of your work. Especially this one. considering sending it to my mom since she smokes and complains that i badger her too much about quitting. my philosophy is that if i don't, who will? And if no one will, who will they have left to badger?
but being familiar with my writing, you probably already know my fascination with death.
anywho, gotta go do some more reviews. later.
later,
luv bells
5/6/2004 c1 81daphnegray78
Great poem. I totally agree. I used to smoke...but I quit ater I realized how utterly stupid it was. Hopefully others will read your poem and realize the same thing. Awesome work! :o)
81daphnegray78Great poem. I totally agree. I used to smoke...but I quit ater I realized how utterly stupid it was. Hopefully others will read your poem and realize the same thing. Awesome work! :o)
3/24/2004 c1 19soulful eyes
Dang its powerful I smoke but im trying to quit its hard good job on the poetry
19soulful eyesDang its powerful I smoke but im trying to quit its hard good job on the poetry
1/17/2004 c1 21Lunar Ecalypso
I really, really like your poem...it's so powerful, yet so simple. You seem to be really good at poems, too. Good job! I can't wait to read more of your other stories, too!
21Lunar EcalypsoI really, really like your poem...it's so powerful, yet so simple. You seem to be really good at poems, too. Good job! I can't wait to read more of your other stories, too!
12/10/2003 c1 24echoes of chaos
Wow, somewhere between a killer poem and the best anti-smoking campaign i've ever heard. I like how you mixed the facts with pieces of personal information, that added power to your message because the reader knows you believe in what you're saying. two thumbs up :o)
24echoes of chaosWow, somewhere between a killer poem and the best anti-smoking campaign i've ever heard. I like how you mixed the facts with pieces of personal information, that added power to your message because the reader knows you believe in what you're saying. two thumbs up :o)
11/11/2003 c1 6Vilverin
Ok you just made me cry. My great-aunt, my aunt, my great-grandmother, my uncle and my cousin all died of lung cancer. They were all smokers their entire lives. It really makes me wonder if they had read this would they have kept on smoking until they died? Great poem, keep writing.
6VilverinOk you just made me cry. My great-aunt, my aunt, my great-grandmother, my uncle and my cousin all died of lung cancer. They were all smokers their entire lives. It really makes me wonder if they had read this would they have kept on smoking until they died? Great poem, keep writing.
10/24/2003 c1 1Hidden Self
gud poem, very informative. more of a speech-like n truthful. smokin sux!
~*Hidden Self*~
1Hidden Selfgud poem, very informative. more of a speech-like n truthful. smokin sux!
~*Hidden Self*~