for Drawn Out Once More6/26/2004 c1 
2Dyyla Joi
What a moving poem! I really like how at the end, you don't just give up, but keep waiting to come out again.
2Dyyla JoiWhat a moving poem! I really like how at the end, you don't just give up, but keep waiting to come out again.
1/25/2004 c1 15Lady Saiira
*huggles you* you always have your cute adoring little sister! But dang.. your poems can be more depressing than Kul-sama's! I like how this had a clear beginning, told a story, and ended in much the same way it began. very moving.
15Lady Saiira*huggles you* you always have your cute adoring little sister! But dang.. your poems can be more depressing than Kul-sama's! I like how this had a clear beginning, told a story, and ended in much the same way it began. very moving.
1/21/2004 c1 3Long Live the Losers
Oh, that was sweet. It's a choice that everyone has to come to inevitably, and you've written it out here with pleasant lyricism. I’m glad that you ended wanting to come out again, and not seal yourself away from hurt and happiness.
3Long Live the LosersOh, that was sweet. It's a choice that everyone has to come to inevitably, and you've written it out here with pleasant lyricism. I’m glad that you ended wanting to come out again, and not seal yourself away from hurt and happiness.
6/2/2003 c1 16Homicidal Teddy Bear
VERY thought provoking! Wow... and wow again! It's not the typical 'oh I love him/her so much' piece of poetry, and I like that a lot. It's DIFFERENT, and different in a good way. ^_^ I like the ending very much - it ends with wanting to be set free. Very good. ^_^
16Homicidal Teddy BearVERY thought provoking! Wow... and wow again! It's not the typical 'oh I love him/her so much' piece of poetry, and I like that a lot. It's DIFFERENT, and different in a good way. ^_^ I like the ending very much - it ends with wanting to be set free. Very good. ^_^