for Lived6/13/2003 c1 
37Sunflower Philosophy
Wow, wow, and ever wow. Your vocabulary is fantastic- I love your way with words! Your messages are strong and resounding. I checked this one because of my poem "Meaningless", which is also about an old person (woman in my case), but the message is different.
"Summery plains and hills", "Like having wings but cannot soar"... wow, wow, wow. This is going in MY favorites!
m~* Sunflower, anyone?
37Sunflower PhilosophyWow, wow, and ever wow. Your vocabulary is fantastic- I love your way with words! Your messages are strong and resounding. I checked this one because of my poem "Meaningless", which is also about an old person (woman in my case), but the message is different.
"Summery plains and hills", "Like having wings but cannot soar"... wow, wow, wow. This is going in MY favorites!
m~* Sunflower, anyone?
6/11/2003 c1 43Jay Lee
Ahh... The memories of an old man remincising his past. But we can all ask, have we truly lived?
43Jay LeeAhh... The memories of an old man remincising his past. But we can all ask, have we truly lived?
6/9/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
wonderful poem! so meaningful. i hope that at the end of my life, i can feel this way. you did a good job on this. keep up the good work!
36obsidian katanawonderful poem! so meaningful. i hope that at the end of my life, i can feel this way. you did a good job on this. keep up the good work!
6/4/2003 c1 35Mime
You just reminded me of what the ancient Egyptians (and, I think, many other cultures) believed in: As long as someone has lived their life on Earth in good ways, they will never die. Instead, they will live forever in the afterworld.
35MimeYou just reminded me of what the ancient Egyptians (and, I think, many other cultures) believed in: As long as someone has lived their life on Earth in good ways, they will never die. Instead, they will live forever in the afterworld.
6/4/2003 c1 96Mitsunaga
So very true. Life should be enjoyed without fear of death.
P.S.-Thank you for reviewing my haiku's I have not been sending stories for very long and i have still found many people who enjoy them. I will look forward to reading your stories and poetry.
96MitsunagaSo very true. Life should be enjoyed without fear of death.
P.S.-Thank you for reviewing my haiku's I have not been sending stories for very long and i have still found many people who enjoy them. I will look forward to reading your stories and poetry.
6/2/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
This was so beautiful. I will pray for your grandmother.
~Heart of the Sword
100Keep it 100This was so beautiful. I will pray for your grandmother.
~Heart of the Sword
6/2/2003 c1 Needa S
Your piece is excellent! I'm so sorry your grandma is sick. I said a silent prayer for her. God Bless her and you as well. I want to thank-you for that great review you left me on Love! You are soo right.*Hugs*
Your piece is excellent! I'm so sorry your grandma is sick. I said a silent prayer for her. God Bless her and you as well. I want to thank-you for that great review you left me on Love! You are soo right.*Hugs*
6/2/2003 c1 176DefianceIsMe
Some things we don't notice but they can be so precious...so wondrous...We really should take our time to breathe them in like this man has...to enjoy each moment to the fullest.
176DefianceIsMeSome things we don't notice but they can be so precious...so wondrous...We really should take our time to breathe them in like this man has...to enjoy each moment to the fullest.
6/2/2003 c1 Emily
hey that was really good you worded it really well. i understood what you meant keep up the good work!
hey that was really good you worded it really well. i understood what you meant keep up the good work!
6/2/2003 c1 The Black Rider
This just might be your best piece ever. It was so vivid and passionate...you used excellent words here. I'm very sorry about your grandmother. I will pray for you that she will recover.
This just might be your best piece ever. It was so vivid and passionate...you used excellent words here. I'm very sorry about your grandmother. I will pray for you that she will recover.
6/2/2003 c1 greenfroggies
Lovely poem! One or two things though. Firstly, you used verant twice in as many lines. Also, I think 'many few ' does not quite make sense.
Lovely poem! One or two things though. Firstly, you used verant twice in as many lines. Also, I think 'many few ' does not quite make sense.