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34Smoky Bear
really nice poem... i'm not sure about the "many few" bit... but i loved the line "and to watch all this behind unfluttering lids"... the words you've chosen paints pictures which is great.
and while its sad to see people we love go... remember that they're always there in our hearts.
34Smoky Bearreally nice poem... i'm not sure about the "many few" bit... but i loved the line "and to watch all this behind unfluttering lids"... the words you've chosen paints pictures which is great.
and while its sad to see people we love go... remember that they're always there in our hearts.
6/2/2003 c1 106cosmo-queen
Excellent poem. And I hope your grandmother gets better. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenExcellent poem. And I hope your grandmother gets better. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*