
6/2/2003 c1
16Homicidal Teddy Bear
You seemed to have used the word 'fight' in this piece a lot. I dunno, there's something about this that I can't seem to put my finger on... I guess maybe it was the emotion that I caught while reading it. Anyways, good job.

You seemed to have used the word 'fight' in this piece a lot. I dunno, there's something about this that I can't seem to put my finger on... I guess maybe it was the emotion that I caught while reading it. Anyways, good job.