for Butterflies2/25/2005 c1 
16Wing Chant
I thought this poem showed the elegance of how wonderful a lake setting could be. ^_^ This is terrific!
loserz. ;)
16Wing ChantI thought this poem showed the elegance of how wonderful a lake setting could be. ^_^ This is terrific!
loserz. ;)
6/30/2004 c1 invalid id
Hmm, this is kind of interesting. Your name reminds me of a Buffy the Vampire Slayer/Angel character (Her name was Drusilla, a psycho vampire IDK if you know it or not so that's why I type this So if you do, sorr-ee) but she loved gardens too. So in that sense I think it was really cool, cause it reminds me of one of my favorite shows. I think the image of a butterfly garden is just like whoa, because I can envision that site and it's beautiful and kinda of magical. The whole garden sounds peaceful and this is sort of soothing. Really nice work here.
"He's got cow eyes. Big and black...mo." (Sorry, I just had to do a Drusilla line :D)
Hmm, this is kind of interesting. Your name reminds me of a Buffy the Vampire Slayer/Angel character (Her name was Drusilla, a psycho vampire IDK if you know it or not so that's why I type this So if you do, sorr-ee) but she loved gardens too. So in that sense I think it was really cool, cause it reminds me of one of my favorite shows. I think the image of a butterfly garden is just like whoa, because I can envision that site and it's beautiful and kinda of magical. The whole garden sounds peaceful and this is sort of soothing. Really nice work here.
"He's got cow eyes. Big and black...mo." (Sorry, I just had to do a Drusilla line :D)
6/9/2004 c1 26IcyDevil27
I really enjoyed that poem. Perhaps, it's because it had a more original theme than the majority of the poems I read and write. Brilliant.
26IcyDevil27I really enjoyed that poem. Perhaps, it's because it had a more original theme than the majority of the poems I read and write. Brilliant.
4/25/2004 c1 hobbitgirl
I especially like the line "...sometimes I talk to the butterflies in the garden/and sometimes they talk to me." Beautiful work.
I especially like the line "...sometimes I talk to the butterflies in the garden/and sometimes they talk to me." Beautiful work.
4/24/2004 c1 snow zephyr
I really liked this...write more poetry please! :)
I really liked this...write more poetry please! :)
4/24/2004 c1 snow zephyr
I really liked this...write more poetry please! :)
I really liked this...write more poetry please! :)
2/6/2004 c1 32aconsciousjulia
its pretty, but, idk, i just dont really like it...there isnt much to feel, only a little to see...shrug, i could be wrong, you are a professional after all...
32aconsciousjuliaits pretty, but, idk, i just dont really like it...there isnt much to feel, only a little to see...shrug, i could be wrong, you are a professional after all...
1/2/2004 c1 angelx3
i like the poem. the garden sounds nice.
_angel
i like the poem. the garden sounds nice.
_angel
12/28/2003 c1 Bamboti
dont we all wish that? well if we all dont i know i do. good poem, except i'm not sure i like how u added in the stuff in ( ). other than that, very good, i could picture the picture in my head.
CA
dont we all wish that? well if we all dont i know i do. good poem, except i'm not sure i like how u added in the stuff in ( ). other than that, very good, i could picture the picture in my head.
CA
12/17/2003 c1 Chambered emotions
awesome:) I loved the little notes you snuck into there...hehehe. I want a garden too! I loved the imagery you put into here, especially when you said the part about the deer nibbling your toes...it makes nature sound so beautiful and graceful...great job!
awesome:) I loved the little notes you snuck into there...hehehe. I want a garden too! I loved the imagery you put into here, especially when you said the part about the deer nibbling your toes...it makes nature sound so beautiful and graceful...great job!