for Living with Trey Duvall10/21/2003 c23 
13Luv Struk Chord
ok...i read it last night and i couldnt review cuz my bro was trying to get on the comp. (thas why i emailed u when i was in the middle of reading) its really good!
poor faith. i feel sorry for her, having to go through all this and then trey goes off and has breakfast with the burt dude leaving her there by herself. *sniff*
keep it up!
~ACE~
13Luv Struk Chordok...i read it last night and i couldnt review cuz my bro was trying to get on the comp. (thas why i emailed u when i was in the middle of reading) its really good!
poor faith. i feel sorry for her, having to go through all this and then trey goes off and has breakfast with the burt dude leaving her there by herself. *sniff*
keep it up!
~ACE~
10/21/2003 c23 16luvurflyingmonkey123
wow. I really didn't expect Jordan to react that way. Seriously, it was a little scary to see how camly he acted. Damn, that would hurt so much if I was Faith. I mean, to have your best friend act as if you two barely knew each other? Pretty awful if you ask me.
Haha, the dream at the beginning definitely got me very hopeful there for a while. I seriously thought that it was in the future...
Uh-oh, I can sense some conflict rising here, Faith will probably be mighty pissed off when Trey finally shows up eh? EEk... tension.
I can't wait until the next chapter! :-D
Good job!
16luvurflyingmonkey123wow. I really didn't expect Jordan to react that way. Seriously, it was a little scary to see how camly he acted. Damn, that would hurt so much if I was Faith. I mean, to have your best friend act as if you two barely knew each other? Pretty awful if you ask me.
Haha, the dream at the beginning definitely got me very hopeful there for a while. I seriously thought that it was in the future...
Uh-oh, I can sense some conflict rising here, Faith will probably be mighty pissed off when Trey finally shows up eh? EEk... tension.
I can't wait until the next chapter! :-D
Good job!
10/21/2003 c23 5sakura arashi
wow! sorry i haven't reviewed for ages. well, here it is now. IT'S REALLY REALLY GOOD! I am totally hooked on it. Anyway, you better review soon! I want to know how it's all going to end!
5sakura arashiwow! sorry i haven't reviewed for ages. well, here it is now. IT'S REALLY REALLY GOOD! I am totally hooked on it. Anyway, you better review soon! I want to know how it's all going to end!
10/16/2003 c22 Carolyn Jeannette
"There was a bag of candy resting next to the dog and on the other side, two adorable balloons that read, "Get well soon," and "Thanking of you.""
*breaks out laughing* I'm sorry...so sorry, but that type-o HAD to be pointed out...thanking of you? I mean seriously...lmao...
so sorry...it's nearly 1 am, i should be in bed, I'm just really hyper...at least this is the last chapter for tonight. Oh well..it was a really sweet ending...
Update soon missy
Cat
"There was a bag of candy resting next to the dog and on the other side, two adorable balloons that read, "Get well soon," and "Thanking of you.""
*breaks out laughing* I'm sorry...so sorry, but that type-o HAD to be pointed out...thanking of you? I mean seriously...lmao...
so sorry...it's nearly 1 am, i should be in bed, I'm just really hyper...at least this is the last chapter for tonight. Oh well..it was a really sweet ending...
Update soon missy
Cat
10/16/2003 c21 Carolyn Jeannette
Umm...who is Josh Duhamel anyway?
anyway, it was an excellent chapter, in it's sadistic, you-love-to-torment-make-believe-people way.
Later
cat
Umm...who is Josh Duhamel anyway?
anyway, it was an excellent chapter, in it's sadistic, you-love-to-torment-make-believe-people way.
Later
cat
10/16/2003 c20 Carolyn Jeannette
Your sadistic...I think you lie awake late at night and DREAM of ways to make people go crazy...it's almost a good thing that I've been busy because now I'm not caught up on this cliffy...Evil person...
Cat
Your sadistic...I think you lie awake late at night and DREAM of ways to make people go crazy...it's almost a good thing that I've been busy because now I'm not caught up on this cliffy...Evil person...
Cat
10/16/2003 c19 Carolyn Jeannette
dun-dun-dun...the plot thickens!
Sorry, couldn't resist. There is one little thing that's been nagging me when reading this...(other than type-o's) Which is that fact that Faith is 16 years old...I'M 16 years old...and I"m only a sophmore in high school...she'd have had to do some skipping to be 16 and a senior...well no...if her birthday is like in september then she could be young for her grade...and then she could be about to turn 17...oh blah...what the hell am I doing? it's just me being nit-picky.
Excellent Chapter,
Cat
dun-dun-dun...the plot thickens!
Sorry, couldn't resist. There is one little thing that's been nagging me when reading this...(other than type-o's) Which is that fact that Faith is 16 years old...I'M 16 years old...and I"m only a sophmore in high school...she'd have had to do some skipping to be 16 and a senior...well no...if her birthday is like in september then she could be young for her grade...and then she could be about to turn 17...oh blah...what the hell am I doing? it's just me being nit-picky.
Excellent Chapter,
Cat
10/16/2003 c18 Carolyn Jeannette
Ok, it wasn't funny, but sad...but a good sad. A very good sad. *sings along with smash mouth for a moment*
Anway...I don't quite know what to say, except the fact that I don't think ANY guy could actually be that sweet...but then again...it is fiction...
Later
Cat
Ok, it wasn't funny, but sad...but a good sad. A very good sad. *sings along with smash mouth for a moment*
Anway...I don't quite know what to say, except the fact that I don't think ANY guy could actually be that sweet...but then again...it is fiction...
Later
Cat
10/16/2003 c17 Carolyn Jeannette
Boo!
The evil one who disappears has reappeared!
*bows to the lovely audience, 'thank you, thank you very much'*
So...miss me? i see i've got a lot to catch up on...I'm sorry I haven't been able to read and review in awhile...I made the fall play, chamber orchestra, got landed with history, geometry and spanish ALL in the same quarter, not to mention orchestra again, and I've got to learn violin now added to my viola and...well, I've been swamped. But it's MEA, which means I have a four day weekend, which means catching up!
So on to Trey...yet, again, an occasonal type-o that makes me want to cringe...but they're not as bad as they used to, so you're forgiven. It's a very good chapter...or rather, part of chapter...what is up with you spliting these chapters anyway? Oh well...as long as I have stuff to read, it's all good. I'm kind of hoping Faith's mother will like do something crazy...it'll be hilarious if she does...but to find out if you think the way I do, I have to move on...see ya!
Cat
Boo!
The evil one who disappears has reappeared!
*bows to the lovely audience, 'thank you, thank you very much'*
So...miss me? i see i've got a lot to catch up on...I'm sorry I haven't been able to read and review in awhile...I made the fall play, chamber orchestra, got landed with history, geometry and spanish ALL in the same quarter, not to mention orchestra again, and I've got to learn violin now added to my viola and...well, I've been swamped. But it's MEA, which means I have a four day weekend, which means catching up!
So on to Trey...yet, again, an occasonal type-o that makes me want to cringe...but they're not as bad as they used to, so you're forgiven. It's a very good chapter...or rather, part of chapter...what is up with you spliting these chapters anyway? Oh well...as long as I have stuff to read, it's all good. I'm kind of hoping Faith's mother will like do something crazy...it'll be hilarious if she does...but to find out if you think the way I do, I have to move on...see ya!
Cat
10/13/2003 c22 4Katcher
Aw...
How sweet. The dog in the basket was adorbale. I also loved his slip up,
"And the cocker spaniel thing, totally unplanned." Hehehe, its nice to see him not soo perfect, but so close at the same time!
I can't wait fur the next chapter!
4KatcherAw...
How sweet. The dog in the basket was adorbale. I also loved his slip up,
"And the cocker spaniel thing, totally unplanned." Hehehe, its nice to see him not soo perfect, but so close at the same time!
I can't wait fur the next chapter!
10/11/2003 c22 Princess Chloe
That was so sweet! I love that cocker spaniel. Well, I hope their phone converstaion goes well and Trey should bring flowers when he sees her next. Anyway, update soon, and I should have something new up soon too! ~Chloe
That was so sweet! I love that cocker spaniel. Well, I hope their phone converstaion goes well and Trey should bring flowers when he sees her next. Anyway, update soon, and I should have something new up soon too! ~Chloe
10/10/2003 c22 17lostmyglassslipper
Luv it Luv it Luv it! Are they going to end up finally going out and does he take her to the awards show? Hurry up& update, also I've got an alternate ending to my story Can this love last a Lifetime up! Read and review me if you want! Jen :-D
17lostmyglassslipperLuv it Luv it Luv it! Are they going to end up finally going out and does he take her to the awards show? Hurry up& update, also I've got an alternate ending to my story Can this love last a Lifetime up! Read and review me if you want! Jen :-D
10/9/2003 c22 14Glacial Rose
OKAY! Finally! lol... First off...Thanks for reviewing my story... I REALLY appreciate it... Also... I LOVE your story... Very well written... Thanks for mentioning it in your review... I was running out of good reads... :D Keep up the good work!
Jenners
14Glacial RoseOKAY! Finally! lol... First off...Thanks for reviewing my story... I REALLY appreciate it... Also... I LOVE your story... Very well written... Thanks for mentioning it in your review... I was running out of good reads... :D Keep up the good work!
Jenners