for Living with Trey Duvall3/23/2005 c24 
1Madcow13
Annoyingly enough chapter fourteen won't appear... I'll have to review here and come back later to see whether my computer lets me view it.
I love this so far. You have lots of plot twists and funny quirks to all of your characters. Trey and Faith have to get together!
Also, a girl for Christian would be a good idea: he deserves someone.
Anyway, great work. This rocks!
1Madcow13Annoyingly enough chapter fourteen won't appear... I'll have to review here and come back later to see whether my computer lets me view it.
I love this so far. You have lots of plot twists and funny quirks to all of your characters. Trey and Faith have to get together!
Also, a girl for Christian would be a good idea: he deserves someone.
Anyway, great work. This rocks!
3/18/2005 c30 Princess Chloe
*grinning* This chapter was wonderful! Goodness, I'm so glad you updated. I missed this story.
My favorite character is definitely Christian. He's so sweet, and look what he gave up for the family! I'm just sad Mindy didn't stay with him. Poor him, knowing he might have had a child and a family, but lost it.
I really hope the date goes okay! Faith and Trey are adorable together.
Well, I hope you update again soon. ~Chloe
*grinning* This chapter was wonderful! Goodness, I'm so glad you updated. I missed this story.
My favorite character is definitely Christian. He's so sweet, and look what he gave up for the family! I'm just sad Mindy didn't stay with him. Poor him, knowing he might have had a child and a family, but lost it.
I really hope the date goes okay! Faith and Trey are adorable together.
Well, I hope you update again soon. ~Chloe
3/5/2005 c31 Mush Jones
Wonderful chapter! It took me a while before I had time to read it and now I wish I had read it sooner because it's just great! That Trey...how can you not love him? Again...Awesome as always! Can't wait for the next update!
Wonderful chapter! It took me a while before I had time to read it and now I wish I had read it sooner because it's just great! That Trey...how can you not love him? Again...Awesome as always! Can't wait for the next update!
2/22/2005 c31 caligrl478
God, it took you a long time to update. The chapter was awesome though. Totally worht the wait
God, it took you a long time to update. The chapter was awesome though. Totally worht the wait
2/4/2005 c31 17Marie Baringer
They registered as a married couple, but the waiter addressed them as Mr. Duvall and Ms. Landen when they were about to kiss, there was a discussion in front of the waiter about a date, and then later the waiter addressed Trey as Mr. Os-whatever-the-name-was. Something is a little confused...
17Marie BaringerThey registered as a married couple, but the waiter addressed them as Mr. Duvall and Ms. Landen when they were about to kiss, there was a discussion in front of the waiter about a date, and then later the waiter addressed Trey as Mr. Os-whatever-the-name-was. Something is a little confused...
2/3/2005 c31 dreamerdoll
*grins* i liked it...but he was kinda a jerk. its a guy thing. *rolls eyes* but hes still really awesome!
*grins* i liked it...but he was kinda a jerk. its a guy thing. *rolls eyes* but hes still really awesome!
1/31/2005 c31 13Bridge Ann Wall
Very great so far. The only thing is that it could use some editting. There are a lot of typos and such that need to be worked out when you finish the piece. I really love your plot and characters. Keep up the good work and update soon.
13Bridge Ann WallVery great so far. The only thing is that it could use some editting. There are a lot of typos and such that need to be worked out when you finish the piece. I really love your plot and characters. Keep up the good work and update soon.
1/31/2005 c31 1SomeRandomWriter
MAN I THOUGHT YOU'D NEVER UPDATE! but my fears have come to rest! i completely LOVE this story!
i hope you update REALLY soon!
cya
1SomeRandomWriterMAN I THOUGHT YOU'D NEVER UPDATE! but my fears have come to rest! i completely LOVE this story!
i hope you update REALLY soon!
cya
11/27/2004 c30 2Lily-007
Hi,I read all your story in one time and can't drop out my eyes!Its a very good!Gosh..I wait for the next chapter! I'm sure it will be so lovely with the Faith and Trey's date!Oh my, I want the same boyfriend, I want you Trey duvall ! lol
( Sorry for my baddest english, but I'm french^^ It's not an apology but it's explain my bad english ! lol )
Kiss, LiLy
2Lily-007Hi,I read all your story in one time and can't drop out my eyes!Its a very good!Gosh..I wait for the next chapter! I'm sure it will be so lovely with the Faith and Trey's date!Oh my, I want the same boyfriend, I want you Trey duvall ! lol
( Sorry for my baddest english, but I'm french^^ It's not an apology but it's explain my bad english ! lol )
Kiss, LiLy
11/2/2004 c30 4Sing With The Elevator Music
i'm sorry i never reviewed sooner, but ficpress was being mean to me and wouldn't let me review! i'm so sorry!
anyway about your story, i love the whole idea and im torn between J and Trey! i want her with J because it seems right, but Trey is really sweet to her. i dont know though, he's SO old!
my only complaint is that as i read it i had to stop and figure out what you were trying to say, because you'd leave out a letter or put spaces in the wrong places. it could have also been a tad bit more discriptive.
i really love the way you portrayde Christian, as her brother and "father" i wich my older brother was like that lol!
I cant wait for the sequal!
-Brownie
4Sing With The Elevator Musici'm sorry i never reviewed sooner, but ficpress was being mean to me and wouldn't let me review! i'm so sorry!
anyway about your story, i love the whole idea and im torn between J and Trey! i want her with J because it seems right, but Trey is really sweet to her. i dont know though, he's SO old!
my only complaint is that as i read it i had to stop and figure out what you were trying to say, because you'd leave out a letter or put spaces in the wrong places. it could have also been a tad bit more discriptive.
i really love the way you portrayde Christian, as her brother and "father" i wich my older brother was like that lol!
I cant wait for the sequal!
-Brownie
10/30/2004 c30 1Satan's Angelic Mistress
Aw...Trey and Christian are so sweet. Poor Jordan...what's going to happen to him?
1Satan's Angelic MistressAw...Trey and Christian are so sweet. Poor Jordan...what's going to happen to him?
10/22/2004 c30 1SomeRandomWriter
heya
sry i havnt sent in more reviews, i read in bulk! i hope you get more chapters up soon!
i cant wait to find out what happens!
that thing bout christian is soo sad and he is the best guy so you hav to make sumthing really good happen to him, and to jordan!
hope you update soon!
cya
1SomeRandomWriterheya
sry i havnt sent in more reviews, i read in bulk! i hope you get more chapters up soon!
i cant wait to find out what happens!
that thing bout christian is soo sad and he is the best guy so you hav to make sumthing really good happen to him, and to jordan!
hope you update soon!
cya