for Living with Trey Duvall7/3/2003 c5 Princess Chloe
Suspense is a good thing. And this chapter was very suspenseful. I like it. It'll be a good lead in for the next chapter.
Well, I'll read more later! I like this story!
~Chloe
Suspense is a good thing. And this chapter was very suspenseful. I like it. It'll be a good lead in for the next chapter.
Well, I'll read more later! I like this story!
~Chloe
7/3/2003 c5 venus725
soory, not signed in today...anyway, great chapter! it is starting to get like mine...anyways, i'm off to read the next!
ciao!
*venus725*
ps. hey, i'm looking for a beta-reader, at least for my original stories, and i was wondering if you were interested. email me!
soory, not signed in today...anyway, great chapter! it is starting to get like mine...anyways, i'm off to read the next!
ciao!
*venus725*
ps. hey, i'm looking for a beta-reader, at least for my original stories, and i was wondering if you were interested. email me!
7/3/2003 c4 Princess Chloe
This love thing just gets more and more complicated, doesn't it?
I liked this chapter. It really gave me a chance to see Trey vs. Faith, and also, it shows that Trey is still human, despite being different.
~Chloe
This love thing just gets more and more complicated, doesn't it?
I liked this chapter. It really gave me a chance to see Trey vs. Faith, and also, it shows that Trey is still human, despite being different.
~Chloe
7/3/2003 c3 Princess Chloe
" Let me at her!" she shrieked, angrily.
I think this statement is a bit inappropriate, unless Shara actually makes a charge at Yolanda. You should use "Why you little..." or "How dare you!" instead.
This was a pretty interesting chapter! I love Jordan, he is so awesome. The end got me pretty excited. Yolanda is the best friend ever. Also, I love the interesting names you use. I have never heard the name Shara before.
I'm going to keep reading! Can't wait to find out what happens next.
~Chloe
" Let me at her!" she shrieked, angrily.
I think this statement is a bit inappropriate, unless Shara actually makes a charge at Yolanda. You should use "Why you little..." or "How dare you!" instead.
This was a pretty interesting chapter! I love Jordan, he is so awesome. The end got me pretty excited. Yolanda is the best friend ever. Also, I love the interesting names you use. I have never heard the name Shara before.
I'm going to keep reading! Can't wait to find out what happens next.
~Chloe
7/3/2003 c2 Princess Chloe
Well. That was interesting.
I was thinking it was really nice of Yolanda to inclue a photo involving Faith, but then it turned out she wasn't in it. That's surprising, but cute. I'm hoping that this isn't going to turn into a three-way love triangle. Also, I love how Trey isn't your everyday Joe Smo actor. He's different. It shows creativity, and creativity is a good thing.
~Chloe
Well. That was interesting.
I was thinking it was really nice of Yolanda to inclue a photo involving Faith, but then it turned out she wasn't in it. That's surprising, but cute. I'm hoping that this isn't going to turn into a three-way love triangle. Also, I love how Trey isn't your everyday Joe Smo actor. He's different. It shows creativity, and creativity is a good thing.
~Chloe
7/3/2003 c1 Princess Chloe
This is unlike any story I've ever seen before on this site. Good for you,.
This seems to be getting off to a good start. I liked the Trey shrine and the casserole incident especially. There is a little bit of unnecessary dialogue, but I suppose you need that to get some explaining done before the first chapter. I've done that too.
See you next chapter! And thanx for looking over Guardian for me. I love feedback.
~Chloe
This is unlike any story I've ever seen before on this site. Good for you,.
This seems to be getting off to a good start. I liked the Trey shrine and the casserole incident especially. There is a little bit of unnecessary dialogue, but I suppose you need that to get some explaining done before the first chapter. I've done that too.
See you next chapter! And thanx for looking over Guardian for me. I love feedback.
~Chloe
7/2/2003 c9 
1queen of pain
huh. great chapter. i wouldn't mind having josh duhamel teach me:-D
-mollie
1queen of painhuh. great chapter. i wouldn't mind having josh duhamel teach me:-D
-mollie
7/1/2003 c2 Venus725
o...this is getting good. this trey duvall guy...hm...reminds me of someone...wait a minute! rett...parks...lol, just kidding! they are similar though! i guess that means we both like our leading men to be sweet and gorgeous looking. anyways, off to read the next!
ciao!
*venus725*
ps. this story is on favoirtes now...go ahead and feel special!
o...this is getting good. this trey duvall guy...hm...reminds me of someone...wait a minute! rett...parks...lol, just kidding! they are similar though! i guess that means we both like our leading men to be sweet and gorgeous looking. anyways, off to read the next!
ciao!
*venus725*
ps. this story is on favoirtes now...go ahead and feel special!
7/1/2003 c1 Venus725
nice story so far...and good first chapter! off to read the next!
ciao!
*venus725*
ps. what fictionpress.net author recommended this, anyways? i need to thank them...anyways, ciao!
nice story so far...and good first chapter! off to read the next!
ciao!
*venus725*
ps. what fictionpress.net author recommended this, anyways? i need to thank them...anyways, ciao!
7/1/2003 c9 Catalina Rowana
Ok, I'm way too lazy to sign in...and for once I don't have to...Did you get rid of your annoymous thingy?
Oh well. I'm sorry it took me this long to get to read this. I've been busy with my friend who came back up from Flordia...no excuse, but it's true, and I've been busy.
Anyway, Great Chapter...Can't wait for something actually to happen between the two other then word lashing sessions. But all in all it's really great. i love it. *stifles yawn*
yeah, well I'll go read your curses now so that I don't forget again...
Cat
Ok, I'm way too lazy to sign in...and for once I don't have to...Did you get rid of your annoymous thingy?
Oh well. I'm sorry it took me this long to get to read this. I've been busy with my friend who came back up from Flordia...no excuse, but it's true, and I've been busy.
Anyway, Great Chapter...Can't wait for something actually to happen between the two other then word lashing sessions. But all in all it's really great. i love it. *stifles yawn*
yeah, well I'll go read your curses now so that I don't forget again...
Cat
7/1/2003 c9 Mush Jones
This is so completely...awesome! I can't even think of how to describe it! I was hooked right from the beginning. Your characters are also great, they'e so natural you really characterized and formed them well! And Trey is wonderful. He's such a nice guy, and he's just a normal person, so down to earth. Anyways! FANTASTIC chapters, I CANNOT wait for more! So please do hurry!
This is so completely...awesome! I can't even think of how to describe it! I was hooked right from the beginning. Your characters are also great, they'e so natural you really characterized and formed them well! And Trey is wonderful. He's such a nice guy, and he's just a normal person, so down to earth. Anyways! FANTASTIC chapters, I CANNOT wait for more! So please do hurry!
7/1/2003 c9 danceswithkoalas
I love your story. I started reading it a couple weeks back and i've re-read it about five times since. I can't wait to see what else you've got planned for it. Good luck with the writing, and here's hoping you don't get writer's block!
I love your story. I started reading it a couple weeks back and i've re-read it about five times since. I can't wait to see what else you've got planned for it. Good luck with the writing, and here's hoping you don't get writer's block!
6/30/2003 c9 Sheeba
Great chapter. I like the relationship between Trey and Faith :wishes she had one with Hayden: Update soon! I want to know what happens next... :)
Great chapter. I like the relationship between Trey and Faith :wishes she had one with Hayden: Update soon! I want to know what happens next... :)
6/30/2003 c9 4False Advertisement
Great! And now Trey has even (kinda) told Faith he likes her! =D
Keep updating! out of all your stories I have to say this is my favorite! And I read a little bit of Brenda, Landen Duvall? Coincedence? I think not!
Haha ttyl,
BrokenIce
4False AdvertisementGreat! And now Trey has even (kinda) told Faith he likes her! =D
Keep updating! out of all your stories I have to say this is my favorite! And I read a little bit of Brenda, Landen Duvall? Coincedence? I think not!
Haha ttyl,
BrokenIce