for Living with Trey Duvall10/9/2004 c30 Mush Jones
GREAT CHAPTER! That was so beautiful and sweet. It made me like Christian more than I already did, and I already really liked him. I can't wait to see what happens on Faith and Trey's date! Please update soon!
GREAT CHAPTER! That was so beautiful and sweet. It made me like Christian more than I already did, and I already really liked him. I can't wait to see what happens on Faith and Trey's date! Please update soon!
10/4/2004 c30 
13Bridge Ann Wall
Good chapter... a little sad, but good. I think that this story is incredibly interesting, so when I tell you that you might want to edit it for spelling and grammar, you know that I mean that in the nicest way. The plot line is very good, and with a little bit of tweaking, I think that this could be awesome. This chapter, which I waited at the wings for, was chock full of goodness, and just a little bit of technical error. I understand the problems, trust me, we all have them, but I thought that if I didn't warn you to look out for them, no one else would, and you might (like the rest of us) assume that they aren't there. Keep up the good work, and update sooner than you did this time.
13Bridge Ann WallGood chapter... a little sad, but good. I think that this story is incredibly interesting, so when I tell you that you might want to edit it for spelling and grammar, you know that I mean that in the nicest way. The plot line is very good, and with a little bit of tweaking, I think that this could be awesome. This chapter, which I waited at the wings for, was chock full of goodness, and just a little bit of technical error. I understand the problems, trust me, we all have them, but I thought that if I didn't warn you to look out for them, no one else would, and you might (like the rest of us) assume that they aren't there. Keep up the good work, and update sooner than you did this time.
10/2/2004 c30 dreamerdoll
this is totally awesome! i absolutely, positively love love love it! christians so supportive...anyway, ive gotta go, its like 12:00, but this was amazing! absolutely fantabulous!
this is totally awesome! i absolutely, positively love love love it! christians so supportive...anyway, ive gotta go, its like 12:00, but this was amazing! absolutely fantabulous!
9/25/2004 c29 7dreamerdoll
this isnt over yet, is it? is it? im gonna die here! please please please say that its not over!its just so...wonderful!
7dreamerdollthis isnt over yet, is it? is it? im gonna die here! please please please say that its not over!its just so...wonderful!
9/22/2004 c4 dreamerdoll
awesome awesome awesome awesome! no chance to say more, but i swear ill review later!
awesome awesome awesome awesome! no chance to say more, but i swear ill review later!
8/28/2004 c29 leila
Ok. Tel me if im stating the obvious, but isn't ur story a lot like the movie Win a Date with Tad Hamilton? I know u didn't copy it or anything because i started reading ur story before it came out... but i live in Australia so maybe ... whatever any way just thought i's let u know. Good story any way! Really enjoyed it. Also is it a coincidence that you keep dedicating or whatever to Josh Duhamal and he is the star of Win a Date with Tad Hamilton? Sorry if i offended u in any way, i didn't mean to! :/
Ok. Tel me if im stating the obvious, but isn't ur story a lot like the movie Win a Date with Tad Hamilton? I know u didn't copy it or anything because i started reading ur story before it came out... but i live in Australia so maybe ... whatever any way just thought i's let u know. Good story any way! Really enjoyed it. Also is it a coincidence that you keep dedicating or whatever to Josh Duhamal and he is the star of Win a Date with Tad Hamilton? Sorry if i offended u in any way, i didn't mean to! :/
6/16/2004 c29 Belle - Laide
this is so good!..plz update soon!..cant wait to see what will happen on their big date
this is so good!..plz update soon!..cant wait to see what will happen on their big date
5/18/2004 c27 Decollage
It needs work. Much work. But I think there's talent in there somewhere... Interesting.
It needs work. Much work. But I think there's talent in there somewhere... Interesting.
5/11/2004 c29 appleeye
hey! i just finished reading this story and i love it! there's lots of drama and a good story plot! please please update soon!
hey! i just finished reading this story and i love it! there's lots of drama and a good story plot! please please update soon!
3/11/2004 c29 24Waltz Moore
Hello again. Sorry I haven't reviewed for quite a while, but I'll try to more often. Lovin' the story so far. Can't wait for the next update!
-[Pre-Used] Soul
PS- BTW, I finally updated Yearbook, so check it out! ^_^
24Waltz MooreHello again. Sorry I haven't reviewed for quite a while, but I'll try to more often. Lovin' the story so far. Can't wait for the next update!
-[Pre-Used] Soul
PS- BTW, I finally updated Yearbook, so check it out! ^_^
3/9/2004 c1 4elyn
thanks for reviewing my story...i think it will be great but the lack of positive response disheartened me...anyway, i'll continue writing it until i got it out of my system...
your story is promising...i like Christian's character... who is jesse anyway? well, i'm going to copy it all in the MS word so i can read it later...it is too long... i promise to read your other story too... in due time...
4elynthanks for reviewing my story...i think it will be great but the lack of positive response disheartened me...anyway, i'll continue writing it until i got it out of my system...
your story is promising...i like Christian's character... who is jesse anyway? well, i'm going to copy it all in the MS word so i can read it later...it is too long... i promise to read your other story too... in due time...
3/7/2004 c29 3stanhops
Great! That's all I really need to say, but since it's taken me forever to review (computer problems) I'm going to tell you all that I think about this story. Let me start with the bad news...we're not all perfect (especially me)... I would have liked to understand why Jesse didn't like Faith, being so pretty and all... maybe I missed it. I got the part that she was an outcast, but she seemed to me like someone who could attract attention. And Trey seemed a bit big-headed to me in the beginning, but he has no problems with dating (or liking) a younger girl who is an outcast? That's about all on the bad side, but I probably just missed it while reading (reading comprehension was never my forte). Well the good news is I love this story. Why? You have a very different story line, and it make me all bubbly (it's sweet). It's also very dramatic, and I love stories like that because I love movies, but none of them are as worthy as a book (makes no sense...I know). Oh, and I also like the friendships in this tale... Yolanda and Faith (aww). Am I missing anything?... Nope...If I am I'll be sure to review once again. Oh by the by Thanks for reading my story!
3stanhopsGreat! That's all I really need to say, but since it's taken me forever to review (computer problems) I'm going to tell you all that I think about this story. Let me start with the bad news...we're not all perfect (especially me)... I would have liked to understand why Jesse didn't like Faith, being so pretty and all... maybe I missed it. I got the part that she was an outcast, but she seemed to me like someone who could attract attention. And Trey seemed a bit big-headed to me in the beginning, but he has no problems with dating (or liking) a younger girl who is an outcast? That's about all on the bad side, but I probably just missed it while reading (reading comprehension was never my forte). Well the good news is I love this story. Why? You have a very different story line, and it make me all bubbly (it's sweet). It's also very dramatic, and I love stories like that because I love movies, but none of them are as worthy as a book (makes no sense...I know). Oh, and I also like the friendships in this tale... Yolanda and Faith (aww). Am I missing anything?... Nope...If I am I'll be sure to review once again. Oh by the by Thanks for reading my story!