for Around the Block7/6/2003 c1 
53Lidless Eye
Didn't really have a rhythm to it, but I guess a string of thoughts doesn't have to have one. Very good, and you can really tell it came from the heart. Nice work, keep on writing!
53Lidless EyeDidn't really have a rhythm to it, but I guess a string of thoughts doesn't have to have one. Very good, and you can really tell it came from the heart. Nice work, keep on writing!