6/7/2003 c6 katelyn devaney too lazy too sign in
GR! who does she like? hehe lol now i know how people feel reading my story:) lol anyways...great job AGAIN. i feel kinda bad for them. hehe need to get together. lol great story,. i really love it. under my favorite stories. :) love it alot girl. i do i think of you as my writing role model. i'm jealous. you write so well... i want to write like you :'( hehe anyways...upload soon

your fan and friend,

Katelyn

6/7/2003 c6 10snowtiger13731
lol. yeah, the review was pretty long, but i'm a very talkative person. thank you for the music. it's cool when there's a story that you can kinda relate to based on your own life. i luv chopin, but i like to bang on mai piano, too, so i use schubert and mendelssohn and beethoven for that. i noticed the lack of key, but most readers don't care about the music. *sniff*sniff*. the damper pedal rox. i overuse it, but that's ok. lol. i'm typing this as i go along in the story. tchaikovsky! yeah! lol. chopin and mozart. i don't know, mozart's okay, but i think i'll have to lean more towards chopin.

ok, now i'm actually going to comment on your story. first of all, just from the way it looks, i'm guessing you used notepad or something similar and made it a text file. you need to click on word wrap for this, otherwise it's all on one line until you press enter.

dude, she's an idiot! she just HAD to ask kevin! grr. ahh! annoying melanie! i wish i had a teacher that would give meeh a free period. oh, i like jesse! torture melanie! make her cry! make her beg! make her suffer! omg, no, jesse is SO not going out with beth! no! this is not happening! i really hope he was lying when melanie said he already had a date. i'll kill all your charrys! lol. i'm just a lil bit hyper rite now, and i can type out really long reviews sometimes. well, c ya. i'm updating either 2day or 2morrow, so look out for mai story.

*~jULiA~*

6/6/2003 c5 2break me boy -x
Whoo... it's getting interesting, and very nerve racking. *sits down and takes bite of cheese* You're a good author, and you update a lot. Just remember, my cheese may not be as powerful... seeing as to how there's a chunk missing... but it will hurt just as much! *holds up cheese and nances about* So... any questions?

6/6/2003 c5 2Ha-sone
This is good stuff, and no, I'm not saying that just because I'm your brother. If it was really that bad, I'd tell you (but probably not here). It's well written, the subject material is funny, and you know how to laugh at yourself and do it well. That's the best part. You could make yourself out to be a tragic hero or something, but you give us a hilarious story.

And why do I never know about these things?

6/6/2003 c5 JazzeeT
hahha. i really like your story. but i if i were ur sis, i would smack on the back of the head now. lol

update soon

6/6/2003 c1 1Starlett Cristal
Hey, I have a policy of reading others work when they review mine. I only got thru one chapter of this today, but it's really good so far. I love Nicole...she has my name! :) (Well the Crystal part!) I hope to finish the other chapters soon. Keep them coming, I'm really interested!

6/4/2003 c4 5MandyHubbard
HEY!

This chapter is just too funny! HAHA. sorry, iguess its a true story, so i shouldnt laugh, eh? But then again, i made a fool of myself, more than onece in front of a guy.

My best friend liked htis guy, and had the perfect opportunity to talk to him-an interview for the school yearbook. Unfortunatley she was leaning against a desk as she started her questions, and the said desk slid away from her, resulting in her falling on the ground mid-sentence. Awful, huh? LOL.Atleast you weren't that bad! :)

Panda