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7/3/2003 c16 10starsprinkles9604
Sweet ending...I like it very very much! Good story and such, I'll be looking forward to more of your work!
7/2/2003 c16 10LPScissorhands
ah, it was so great! the ending was good, the whole story was good, i loved it all!
7/2/2003 c16 14L.N.Y. Wun
It's over and done...aw...(shoulda gone with my way of cleaning the betters...anyone who bets on me, I take a percentage of the profits!)Way to go girlie!
7/1/2003 c16 Cara Sterling
Wow kinda sad that this story is over. LoL. But does this mean that you are over Chris? And gonna move on to another guy like Jake? Or not, just adding a twist to the story? Anywho, the story was great, and kept me interested so thumbs up to that! Catch ya around!

~*Jaden*~

PS let me know if u ever have another story up.
6/30/2003 c16 17shadowgirl618
AWH! HOW SWET! but i still like jesse. *squints left eye* so much for the beginning. ah well. jake is good too. GOOD! he's ABSOLUTELY DAZZLING! lol actually not dazzling but yeah. dazzling was my new word this week!...heh...

-shadowgirl618-

P.S. AWH! Last review for dis storie from me! aw well. ^_^
6/30/2003 c16 2mez1
wicked story

congrates on finishing it
6/30/2003 c16 4EmNight87
YAY! YAY! YAY!
6/29/2003 c16 5MandyHubbard
YAY! I am so glad you decided to go this route... I konw in the beginning it was going to be al about Jesse, but I am so very happy that she found Jake! WOOHOO.

Great story, I love how much you developed as a writer as it went on... more and more detail was added in, until it was just perfect! Yay for you! :)

Congrats on a great story...

Panda
6/29/2003 c16 3Lizzy2
OH MY FREAKING GOD! THAT WAS SO GOOD. AND THE KISS? OH BABY I WISH I WAS KISSED LIKE THAT! SHE GOT THE GUY! WOO HOO! THEN AGAIN, IT'S NOT JESSE, BUT JAKE IS WAY BETTER!
6/29/2003 c16 Ashlita
Aw, sweet ending. Great job! I really loved this story.

~Ashlita
6/29/2003 c16 8DragonLow
Ah, that was PERFECT! Even though I like both Jake and Jesse, I think Nicole ending up with Jake was just right. It just fit. Great story! I love it!
6/29/2003 c16 2BlearyEyes
This story rocked from the beginning and I think you've done a great job with it. Keep writing - you've got a knack for it.
6/29/2003 c16 4luckynumba7
oh my gosh i'm gonna cry... oh no here it comes... *wipes tear* That was so beautiful! I can't believe you made me cry! LOL just kiddin but way cute ending! it was awesome although i still do wish it was Jesse... :( But hey i liked it anyway and Jake was hot ;) so... did you tell Jesse eh eh *winks* I bet once he sees me he'll forget all about Nicole *bats eyelashes* no i'm not conceited! How could you think such a thing! LOL and i only have one more thing to say... i think but anyway! WEIRD PEOPLE KICK BUTT! ROCK ON SISTA! i love weird people like me and you. They make the world interesting... without us this world would be a sad sad place... LOL i loved your story! You rock. i look forward to your other ones! :D And remember... tell Jesse eh eh? Because he was dang fine... but i'm thinking of having Jake myself...(the Jake in my story) he is so hot! I think i'm just going to make him cheat on Amelia with me *Smiles innocently* lol j/k alrighty... i'll quit being stupid for a second!

love your most favorite person in the world...

luckynumba7

p.s. WEIRD PEOPLE RULE! ROCK ON! and i have one piece of advice... when you're hyper like me DO NOT i repeat DO NOT drink mountain dew... It makes you act like me... sad i know but it's sunday so i can't hang out with people... so now i'm stuck with my hyperness with no way to vent it out... i think i'm going to go running while singing evanesence! That would be awesome... my neighbors would think i'm weird but HEY! screw them! LOL ok i'll stop talking now! i'm going to go sing outside so people can look at me funny! LATER!
6/29/2003 c16 starsprinkles9604
Yay! They're together now!Good chapter and very sweet ending...
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