for All Over a Boy6/29/2003 c16 
2break me boy -x
EEP! I'm sad that it's over, but it was great! Good short story. Glad she ended up with Jake. Not talking in complete sentences. XD
2break me boy -xEEP! I'm sad that it's over, but it was great! Good short story. Glad she ended up with Jake. Not talking in complete sentences. XD
6/29/2003 c16 FamousOneLiners
wow, so it has ended nicely, i like it but i have this thing for bad endings! anyways, hope u rite somethin new
wow, so it has ended nicely, i like it but i have this thing for bad endings! anyways, hope u rite somethin new
6/29/2003 c13 FamousOneLiners
woo hoo, i finished hp too, it kicked literary ass, and screw age, im glad u have updated , and i honestly didnt think id like a story with a premise of a girl who has the two boy problem situation. but surprisingly its keepin me readin
woo hoo, i finished hp too, it kicked literary ass, and screw age, im glad u have updated , and i honestly didnt think id like a story with a premise of a girl who has the two boy problem situation. but surprisingly its keepin me readin
6/29/2003 c16 beautifuletdown
lol, the 'stupidity in action' line was awesome. Very great chapter, with lots of Billy in it too:)If I ever get a good idea for a spinoff I'll let you know . . . but if you make one tell me! The ending was great, very sweet and closes everything. Jake sounds amazing. I'll miss the story though:(
lol, the 'stupidity in action' line was awesome. Very great chapter, with lots of Billy in it too:)If I ever get a good idea for a spinoff I'll let you know . . . but if you make one tell me! The ending was great, very sweet and closes everything. Jake sounds amazing. I'll miss the story though:(
6/29/2003 c16 7katelyn devaney
GREAT! lol as always;) lol you way underestimate your chaos:) lol...yeah billy is really cool:) i like his character alot...poor jesse but go jake! hehe...very cute:) and it wasn't too sappy;) lolgreat chap girl, great writing, great story great ending:) lol too cool girl:)anxiously awaiting more to cu now:) lol love you too:) ttyl:)
your forever friend, fan, and fellow author,
Katelyn~*!
7katelyn devaneyGREAT! lol as always;) lol you way underestimate your chaos:) lol...yeah billy is really cool:) i like his character alot...poor jesse but go jake! hehe...very cute:) and it wasn't too sappy;) lolgreat chap girl, great writing, great story great ending:) lol too cool girl:)anxiously awaiting more to cu now:) lol love you too:) ttyl:)
your forever friend, fan, and fellow author,
Katelyn~*!
6/29/2003 c15 10LPScissorhands
ah! i'm going to cry! it's hard to say what's better, jake or jesse, but hell it was so sad, but so good nonetheless!
10LPScissorhandsah! i'm going to cry! it's hard to say what's better, jake or jesse, but hell it was so sad, but so good nonetheless!
6/29/2003 c15 14L.N.Y. Wun
*sob* That was so sad...It would have been hard for me to write a chapter like this without feeling sad...
14L.N.Y. Wun*sob* That was so sad...It would have been hard for me to write a chapter like this without feeling sad...
6/29/2003 c1 16kaika switched
I always start reading at the worst of times, so since I'm already going to be late, I figured I might as well review while I'm here. Great story so far. Jealousy can be a bitch. I really love the way you write, how everything flows so smoothly. I'll be back to catch up later. Keep writing!
16kaika switchedI always start reading at the worst of times, so since I'm already going to be late, I figured I might as well review while I'm here. Great story so far. Jealousy can be a bitch. I really love the way you write, how everything flows so smoothly. I'll be back to catch up later. Keep writing!
6/29/2003 c15 Cara Sterling
Ah man, that was really sad... I don't have much more to say because it is 7:00 am i have to go to work, but my brain isn't functioning... Poor Jesse though, he finally admits it and she loves someone else. I admire her for telling him that though!
Ah man, that was really sad... I don't have much more to say because it is 7:00 am i have to go to work, but my brain isn't functioning... Poor Jesse though, he finally admits it and she loves someone else. I admire her for telling him that though!
6/28/2003 c15 pandapotato
aw, jesse sounded so heatbroken! poor him. :(. But atleast she was honest this time... no secrets...
Great, as always. :) Looking forward to the last chapter... and i hope your wisdom teeth dont hurt as much anymore! :)
Panda
aw, jesse sounded so heatbroken! poor him. :(. But atleast she was honest this time... no secrets...
Great, as always. :) Looking forward to the last chapter... and i hope your wisdom teeth dont hurt as much anymore! :)
Panda
6/28/2003 c15 1Nikki5
aw
OMG!
that was great!
really sad!
can't wait to see what'll happen
update soon!
1Nikki5aw
OMG!
that was great!
really sad!
can't wait to see what'll happen
update soon!
6/28/2003 c15 beautifuletdown
You should make a spinoff for Billy's character or something lol! my favorite character isnt a main one . . . very unlike my usual choice . . .definitely sad chapter. Glad she's with jake, even though he's a wee bit, uh, sensitive. I'll be sad when it all ends:(
You should make a spinoff for Billy's character or something lol! my favorite character isnt a main one . . . very unlike my usual choice . . .definitely sad chapter. Glad she's with jake, even though he's a wee bit, uh, sensitive. I'll be sad when it all ends:(
6/28/2003 c15 4luckynumba7
NO! You are so mean! I can't believe you made her hurt Jesse and go for the wimpy boy! LOL but *sniffs* i can't believe you did that to me! But.. hey i was kiddin bout the story thingy! I don't care really! It aint no thang! LOL Cuz i forgot to put you and tons of other stories that i like on my list! So i have NO room to be whining LOL But i feel SO special that you dedicated the chapter to me! I feel like a movie star! LOL but thank you so much. And hey i have you on author alert too! BAD CHAPTER! lol just kidding it was good. Keep up the good work! I feel so bad for Jesse. But hey! Tell him i'm free Friday night ok *winks* thanks a bunches! I LOVE YOU!
love your most favorite person in the whole wide world...
LUCKYNUMBA7!
P.S. Sorry i am really hyper and i said LOL a lot... i know you think i'm weird but hey! I am! See you later!
4luckynumba7NO! You are so mean! I can't believe you made her hurt Jesse and go for the wimpy boy! LOL but *sniffs* i can't believe you did that to me! But.. hey i was kiddin bout the story thingy! I don't care really! It aint no thang! LOL Cuz i forgot to put you and tons of other stories that i like on my list! So i have NO room to be whining LOL But i feel SO special that you dedicated the chapter to me! I feel like a movie star! LOL but thank you so much. And hey i have you on author alert too! BAD CHAPTER! lol just kidding it was good. Keep up the good work! I feel so bad for Jesse. But hey! Tell him i'm free Friday night ok *winks* thanks a bunches! I LOVE YOU!
love your most favorite person in the whole wide world...
LUCKYNUMBA7!
P.S. Sorry i am really hyper and i said LOL a lot... i know you think i'm weird but hey! I am! See you later!