
12/2/2008 c1
13blurrylights
That was so sweet...I feel like crying right now. Really gorgeous piece. :)

That was so sweet...I feel like crying right now. Really gorgeous piece. :)
5/4/2008 c1
14Dimunda
my gosh this is so sad! im crying by just reading it! its so sad...but its so sweet!

my gosh this is so sad! im crying by just reading it! its so sad...but its so sweet!
5/7/2006 c1
2Christine Ruud
This is so beautiful & touching.
Bittersweet is the only way to describe it.

This is so beautiful & touching.
Bittersweet is the only way to describe it.
11/25/2005 c1 RoseSama35
Oh my gosh! This was so amazing! You tell suck a vivid and emtional story all through one scene, and it's perfect! I couldn't find a thing wrong with it. This was so sweet and wonderful, great job! This is a favorite!
~RoseSama35~
Oh my gosh! This was so amazing! You tell suck a vivid and emtional story all through one scene, and it's perfect! I couldn't find a thing wrong with it. This was so sweet and wonderful, great job! This is a favorite!
~RoseSama35~
10/4/2005 c1 lillix
aw...this is so beautiful. Great job on capturing every detail so perfectly! :)
aw...this is so beautiful. Great job on capturing every detail so perfectly! :)
7/30/2005 c1
1mudonthetires
This was a beautiful story. I love how, though it is short, Jack and Lila are both well developed characters. Wonderful descriptions.

This was a beautiful story. I love how, though it is short, Jack and Lila are both well developed characters. Wonderful descriptions.
7/19/2005 c1
2darkstallion9056
great piece of wrting...i like the way you describe the scenario and out life into the characters...

great piece of wrting...i like the way you describe the scenario and out life into the characters...
7/6/2005 c1 Need 'n' Know
You got me all teared-up! Jack went to jail? At least he learned from it.
Lila's so sad. But she got to know Jack before she left. And I bet that they're happy, since they still lived happily.
Julia.
You got me all teared-up! Jack went to jail? At least he learned from it.
Lila's so sad. But she got to know Jack before she left. And I bet that they're happy, since they still lived happily.
Julia.