for Duty and Defiance12/25/2011 c1 Chocolate Lover
I love your story and the era it was set in, but I find it odd that Caleb is studying in Cambridge. I believe in their era Cambridge was more known for the sciences and Oxford for the arts and literature. All in all, you've done an admirable job of writing a story reminiscent of Jane Austen's era. :)
I love your story and the era it was set in, but I find it odd that Caleb is studying in Cambridge. I believe in their era Cambridge was more known for the sciences and Oxford for the arts and literature. All in all, you've done an admirable job of writing a story reminiscent of Jane Austen's era. :)
3/14/2009 c41 Kajal
Great story! I haven't read all of it, just bits and pieces. I'm actually kinda loving Adam at times. He's a trouble maker and a player he redeemed himself in the end. I'd really like to read a sequel about what happened with him and Audrey. Or at the very least to see his son growing up to be a ladies man himself and see how he deals with that.
Great story! I haven't read all of it, just bits and pieces. I'm actually kinda loving Adam at times. He's a trouble maker and a player he redeemed himself in the end. I'd really like to read a sequel about what happened with him and Audrey. Or at the very least to see his son growing up to be a ladies man himself and see how he deals with that.
229/2/2006 c41 Michelle Habibi
wow! i love this story! and i finally finished reading it! you should really write more stories, maybe a sequel to this one. but then who would it be about? hmm...decisions, decisions. anyways, see ya!
-Michelle Habibi
wow! i love this story! and i finally finished reading it! you should really write more stories, maybe a sequel to this one. but then who would it be about? hmm...decisions, decisions. anyways, see ya!
-Michelle Habibi
12/12/2005 c41 Shirel
Yay! so good! id write something more but its like 1 am and im dead to the world. ciao!
Yay! so good! id write something more but its like 1 am and im dead to the world. ciao!
12/12/2005 c34 Shirel
I think this story is strongly based on very bad-timing. very much like romeo and juliet mind you, although i think i like this tale better. Unless someone dies at the end...
I think this story is strongly based on very bad-timing. very much like romeo and juliet mind you, although i think i like this tale better. Unless someone dies at the end...
12/12/2005 c16 Shirel
Ok so this is my theory. Madeleine and Desmond used to be in love and she left him because she didnt want to disgrace him or something. At a certain point, i thought Desmond was gay but i dont think thats the case anymore. Anyway, i guess ill see if im right!
Ok so this is my theory. Madeleine and Desmond used to be in love and she left him because she didnt want to disgrace him or something. At a certain point, i thought Desmond was gay but i dont think thats the case anymore. Anyway, i guess ill see if im right!
12/10/2005 c3 Shirel
Oh i love forbidden romances! so very Romeo and Juliet. anyway, im really liking the start although at first i thought the romance was to be between Bella and Adam. Maybe it will be since in the summary u mentionned an Englishman so it could go either way. I guess we'll see.
Oh i love forbidden romances! so very Romeo and Juliet. anyway, im really liking the start although at first i thought the romance was to be between Bella and Adam. Maybe it will be since in the summary u mentionned an Englishman so it could go either way. I guess we'll see.
5/22/2005 c41 emerald
*can't stop smiling - now* i have had a horrible day- well not whole day but i have had some really horrendous incidents today which would have better not happen but you *smiling yet* have taken my mind from it completely *grin* ...that was perfect, they are so sweet, so made for each other *still smiling* and the epilogue and cat were the greatest additions for a lovely ending...ahh if only really life were that wonderful *sigh* - oh yeah i am still smling...you made my day...thanks hon a lot!
*can't stop smiling - now* i have had a horrible day- well not whole day but i have had some really horrendous incidents today which would have better not happen but you *smiling yet* have taken my mind from it completely *grin* ...that was perfect, they are so sweet, so made for each other *still smiling* and the epilogue and cat were the greatest additions for a lovely ending...ahh if only really life were that wonderful *sigh* - oh yeah i am still smling...you made my day...thanks hon a lot!
12/21/2004 c9 quotata
i am reading behind spread fingers atm ... i really hate disapproved love lol i'll finish it soon. great writing!
i am reading behind spread fingers atm ... i really hate disapproved love lol i'll finish it soon. great writing!