7/1/2004 c1 32Birdaloo
VERY intresting! i REALLY am impressed with your style! NICELY done!
~Birdy

6/8/2004 c1 Ayashino
It's very interesting, especially how you wrote it out!

5/31/2004 c1 14arbysauce93
I really like the originality of this poem. Though I hate most poems in this format as they mean almost nothing, this one does. The only thing that I found was that 'sypathetic' should have an m. Congradolations on finding so many adjectives. I love the idea of the sides not spelling out a word, but a poem to themselves. Great idea and great poem. And thanks for the reviews.

5/30/2004 c1 4Robyn D
hi!
i must say, i think the quote i get from you and alqualonde (vilverin) are my favorite parts of reviewing your work. Undoubtedly the best part of that poem were the line:
live life while you can/ for tomorrow is a mirage,/ that may never become a reality.
Love it!
not that the rest of it was bad. on the contrary. i love the creative way you put together the poem. (the instructions at the beginning were very useful!)
sympathetic thought, has an 'm'
for the phrase every day i am a fool, you forgot to put the y in the vertical. so it reads ever day i am a fool. took me a moment to figure it out...
Some of your words that you chose to describe yourself, i'm not sure they were the best... for instance, omnivore. I know people define themselves as omnivores or vegetarians or carnivores, but i felt it took away from the poem. Here were all these dramatic words that called to mind an interesting and complex creature, and suddenly that world was destroyed by the everyday word Omnivore. It was kinda like, wow, she was just fooling us, she really IS like everyone else. boo!
but it's your story and if you feel that it really DOES describe you, then stick with it.
also, oppressive. did you mean oppresive? as in you oppress people? prevent them from being who they want to be? or do YOU feel oppressed. i wasn't sure what you meant or if you just needed a descriptive word that would fit with s (not to mention the '0')
anywho, still enjoyed it despite not being the greatest conisseur of poetry. (there's TONS of it on this site!)
later days
luv bells

4/21/2004 c1 5chibichan366
wow!
it's so good!i really love it. i mean, it's a poem within a poem. very classic indeed! ur really talented and i'm not just saying that cuz it's some wishy-washy thing, i'm saying the truth and i think that anyone who read this poem will agree with me. it's kind of funny yet serious. the party with the Willy-nilly, cute!
i also want to thank you for supporting me in my essays and my fics. thank you very much, and i must say, you're a very devoted reader.
well, keep up the good work! i'm sure everyone will enjoy your future pieces.^_^
chibichan366

10/10/2003 c1 29angelfeather
This is the first acrostic poem I've ever read and it was really good. The way that you can read it in two different ways and it still remains personal and detailed is awesome. I also wrote something on two sides and it's always interesting to read. Well done.

Also, I must say thank you for the review on my story Freezeframe. I hope you'll keep reading it.

~*~angelfeather~*~ 'I made this.' - X-Files

6/4/2003 c1 43xerarch
i like the title, i like the poem, but i don't like the 1 word lines, i think it woudl have been more effectively done if you just said what the acronym said instead of using words to describe it all. new styles are good though to flirt with :)