for A Boy, A Dragon and Their Insanity11/22/2003 c1 
2FoolishBeloved
Ahahahahah! *continues to laugh her ass off for about ten minutes* Good times *wipes away tears* Good god that was funny! Gotta love those dust ball fights!
Loki-sama
2FoolishBelovedAhahahahah! *continues to laugh her ass off for about ten minutes* Good times *wipes away tears* Good god that was funny! Gotta love those dust ball fights!
Loki-sama
9/25/2003 c1 187Andaren
Ha ha ha! :) This is great, must remember to finish reading it when I have more time.
Thanx for putting me on your bio, by the way :) That's really nice of you.
Blessed Be,
Andaren x
PS thanks for all the reviews :)
187AndarenHa ha ha! :) This is great, must remember to finish reading it when I have more time.
Thanx for putting me on your bio, by the way :) That's really nice of you.
Blessed Be,
Andaren x
PS thanks for all the reviews :)
8/15/2003 c1 14Rabbit Dawg
ROFL ROFL This was really funny. ((D*mn! It's 12:30 in the morning! If my parents heard me laughing then... ::imagines a brutal scene where his eyelids are peeled off so he can't blink and his parents continually poke him in the eyes:: Yeah, it'd be bad. :: gulp ::)) ANYWAY, really good story! (what inspired you to write this anyway...?) So, hope you update soon! (Assuming I can get more free time like today... :: sigh :: )
14Rabbit DawgROFL ROFL This was really funny. ((D*mn! It's 12:30 in the morning! If my parents heard me laughing then... ::imagines a brutal scene where his eyelids are peeled off so he can't blink and his parents continually poke him in the eyes:: Yeah, it'd be bad. :: gulp ::)) ANYWAY, really good story! (what inspired you to write this anyway...?) So, hope you update soon! (Assuming I can get more free time like today... :: sigh :: )
7/28/2003 c1 39zelle
I tried to hold in my laughter. Really, I did.
But apparently, the humor in this story finally got to me and I collapsed into a laughing fit...in the middle of the LIBRARY.
Yes, the people are giving me wierd looks and it's all YOUR fault.
But this story is too funny!
Continue, please? Man, you just keep getting better and better ^_^
I feel like I should critique something. But how do you critique HUMOR?
Continue?
39zelleI tried to hold in my laughter. Really, I did.
But apparently, the humor in this story finally got to me and I collapsed into a laughing fit...in the middle of the LIBRARY.
Yes, the people are giving me wierd looks and it's all YOUR fault.
But this story is too funny!
Continue, please? Man, you just keep getting better and better ^_^
I feel like I should critique something. But how do you critique HUMOR?
Continue?
6/8/2003 c1 Alaurei
Uh...wow! Hah, I thought I was insane but I was wrong...sheeze. This is so funny. Gasp, I have been mentioned! "By the way," Nicki whispers, "My house has a tan roof but that is quite alright and just to let you know, there is a secet hole in your backyard where Nogar accidentally popped through and can't find his way back."
"No, no. You've got it all wrong. Nogar CAME here on his own with me. Maybe his brain is frozen over from so much ice cream that he can't think." Puff explained.
"Oh, okay, I get it now. So, you and Nogar came here on your own?" I asked.
"Uh, yeah. I don't remember how exactly we did it but the old dragon world was boring. Anyway, the slayers numbers were growing and growing and it wasn't so safe." Puf replied.
"And you think it's safe here? You've got to be kidding me. Anyway, I'm glad we met along with Daiger and Nogar. What about all the other dragons. The ones that are in our story?" Nicki asked.
"Uh well yeah, them too." Puff replied digging his hand into a peanut butter container.
"Okay, whatever Puff. Well, Daiger, great story.. Please continue because hopefully this counts as a review so YES please continue." I stated.
"Yes yes, please continue." Puff added in.
"You can be quiet now." I muttered under my breath.
"No!" Puff shouted spewing peanut butter everywhere. I bit my lip to keep from growling.
"I must go now before I strangle my little dragon friend here. Good luck and farewell."
"To infinity, and beyond!"
Uh...wow! Hah, I thought I was insane but I was wrong...sheeze. This is so funny. Gasp, I have been mentioned! "By the way," Nicki whispers, "My house has a tan roof but that is quite alright and just to let you know, there is a secet hole in your backyard where Nogar accidentally popped through and can't find his way back."
"No, no. You've got it all wrong. Nogar CAME here on his own with me. Maybe his brain is frozen over from so much ice cream that he can't think." Puff explained.
"Oh, okay, I get it now. So, you and Nogar came here on your own?" I asked.
"Uh, yeah. I don't remember how exactly we did it but the old dragon world was boring. Anyway, the slayers numbers were growing and growing and it wasn't so safe." Puf replied.
"And you think it's safe here? You've got to be kidding me. Anyway, I'm glad we met along with Daiger and Nogar. What about all the other dragons. The ones that are in our story?" Nicki asked.
"Uh well yeah, them too." Puff replied digging his hand into a peanut butter container.
"Okay, whatever Puff. Well, Daiger, great story.. Please continue because hopefully this counts as a review so YES please continue." I stated.
"Yes yes, please continue." Puff added in.
"You can be quiet now." I muttered under my breath.
"No!" Puff shouted spewing peanut butter everywhere. I bit my lip to keep from growling.
"I must go now before I strangle my little dragon friend here. Good luck and farewell."
"To infinity, and beyond!"
6/6/2003 c1 1Gamemac64
Huh, well, it said to leave a review, and since i'm tied up to my computer chair, with my pre-readers forcing me to write down some more of my story, why not, umm, insane, crazy, uh, funny though, if a bit confusing sometimes, *pre-reader then pokes him in the back of the neck with a spear* uh,... and very very nice, i gotta get back to typing, or i'm gonna die, a brutal, brutal death, *while pre-readers not looking* PLEASE SAVE ME FROM THESE LUNATICS! *pre reader notices and beats the crap outta the writer.
Pre-reader- The worthless baka gotta go back to typing or we'll dye his hair pink and purple again, and then beat him up and make his skin look black and blue, bye for now oh kay!
Autrhor: ouch...
1Gamemac64Huh, well, it said to leave a review, and since i'm tied up to my computer chair, with my pre-readers forcing me to write down some more of my story, why not, umm, insane, crazy, uh, funny though, if a bit confusing sometimes, *pre-reader then pokes him in the back of the neck with a spear* uh,... and very very nice, i gotta get back to typing, or i'm gonna die, a brutal, brutal death, *while pre-readers not looking* PLEASE SAVE ME FROM THESE LUNATICS! *pre reader notices and beats the crap outta the writer.
Pre-reader- The worthless baka gotta go back to typing or we'll dye his hair pink and purple again, and then beat him up and make his skin look black and blue, bye for now oh kay!
Autrhor: ouch...
6/4/2003 c1 kcididfnord
I agree with Belle on this one ... it's incredibly insane, but funny. You switched tenses in a couple spots (present to past tense), but that's about it as far as criticism goes. I hope you continue with this. ^_^
And thanks for putting Rune of Kirindar on your "novel of the week" thing ... I appreciate it - and that review you left me. ^_^ I'll go back and change some words around ... I wrote the entire chapter all at once, so I didn't notice I was repeating adjectives and adverbs. Thanks again! Keep writing!
Skyra
I agree with Belle on this one ... it's incredibly insane, but funny. You switched tenses in a couple spots (present to past tense), but that's about it as far as criticism goes. I hope you continue with this. ^_^
And thanks for putting Rune of Kirindar on your "novel of the week" thing ... I appreciate it - and that review you left me. ^_^ I'll go back and change some words around ... I wrote the entire chapter all at once, so I didn't notice I was repeating adjectives and adverbs. Thanks again! Keep writing!
Skyra
6/4/2003 c1 6Belle the Shadow-Cat
*blinks* School on sunday LOL. THis is really funny, in an insane sort of way. Ha. And all this from trying to tell as story. Very insane. Hope you write more on this. I quite liked it.
-Belle
6Belle the Shadow-Cat*blinks* School on sunday LOL. THis is really funny, in an insane sort of way. Ha. And all this from trying to tell as story. Very insane. Hope you write more on this. I quite liked it.
-Belle