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4/20/2005 c1 243Manuel Fajar
Good use of time between math. Though math has its own time. Thx for your comments, most people don't even understand the humor in that poem. I must admit I think the idea probably's from Mark Twain's "Letters From Earth," perhaps the funniest look at Earth from Heaven you might ever read (in my opinion.) m
12/6/2003 c1 4AAGoddess-of-the-Ocean
That was a really good poem! I really like the way you repeated the last words for the first words of the next sentence (phew!does that make sense?) It made the poem flow. I like the rhymes as well. Good Job.
:)Skylla(:
ps) Please can you read and review my stories? #0_o# *puppy dog eyes*

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