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53Lidless Eye
Wow. Such a strong emotion has been put into this, and it ended so well... Awesome, awesome job. I look forward to reading more from you!
53Lidless EyeWow. Such a strong emotion has been put into this, and it ended so well... Awesome, awesome job. I look forward to reading more from you!
6/30/2003 c1 14MintyLa
Wow...such a strong poem! Many times, I feel indecisive and full of worry, too. The ending gave me the chills...great conveyance of emotion!
:)
14MintyLaWow...such a strong poem! Many times, I feel indecisive and full of worry, too. The ending gave me the chills...great conveyance of emotion!
:)
6/17/2003 c1 41ionlyliveindreams
WOW. I liked that! It was great! So sad, and the ending gave me shivers! I like poems that do that :) ;) Anyways, thanks for all your reviews!
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams
41ionlyliveindreamsWOW. I liked that! It was great! So sad, and the ending gave me shivers! I like poems that do that :) ;) Anyways, thanks for all your reviews!
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams
6/15/2003 c1 30Phercraban
Hey there.
This is a really sad, but awesome poem. I don't think I'll be able to find words to describe it. I'm just running through your work, but this is good! It kinda freaked me out, because it was like you were writing about my deary self. I feel like I know you. Freaky huh?
Keep it up, nothing else to say but to check out some of my work; we write about the same stuff.
Phercraban
30PhercrabanHey there.
This is a really sad, but awesome poem. I don't think I'll be able to find words to describe it. I'm just running through your work, but this is good! It kinda freaked me out, because it was like you were writing about my deary self. I feel like I know you. Freaky huh?
Keep it up, nothing else to say but to check out some of my work; we write about the same stuff.
Phercraban
6/11/2003 c1 9CatieZee
This is one powerful poem. The end is chilling.
It's nice to be able to just get your feelings out via writing. Angst poems are a favorite of mine.
This was very well done.
9CatieZeeThis is one powerful poem. The end is chilling.
It's nice to be able to just get your feelings out via writing. Angst poems are a favorite of mine.
This was very well done.
6/10/2003 c1 98hurtmushroom
This is so sad! But there's always a nother way, I'm sure about that! Keep it up!
cio hoellenwauwau
98hurtmushroomThis is so sad! But there's always a nother way, I'm sure about that! Keep it up!
cio hoellenwauwau
6/9/2003 c1 Strayct
wow powerful poem.
I had those feelings too. just kept thinking, is this really worth it? well, it is, with all the fucked up (excuse ,y language) things in the world, there are a lot of good things too!
keep beleaving in Jesus and He will help you, keep writing too!
Stray
wow powerful poem.
I had those feelings too. just kept thinking, is this really worth it? well, it is, with all the fucked up (excuse ,y language) things in the world, there are a lot of good things too!
keep beleaving in Jesus and He will help you, keep writing too!
Stray
6/5/2003 c1 The Black Rider
Very dark and angsty. It felt like I was being pulled into this world, which I'm no real stranger to anyway. Great job.
Very dark and angsty. It felt like I was being pulled into this world, which I'm no real stranger to anyway. Great job.
6/4/2003 c1 26kamikaze899
i liked it! sorta creepy though. i could really sense your anger here.. keep writing ^^
26kamikaze899i liked it! sorta creepy though. i could really sense your anger here.. keep writing ^^
6/4/2003 c1 80Sorceress Knight
Man. You aren't nice about the truth are you? It sux feeling that way. Worry if you wish to, no one has the right to tell you what and what isn't a sin except God. SK
80Sorceress KnightMan. You aren't nice about the truth are you? It sux feeling that way. Worry if you wish to, no one has the right to tell you what and what isn't a sin except God. SK