for Guna Fly6/5/2003 c1 Lantana
This is realy nice, realy kind of personal- it works how you've written it with all the contractions and slang... makes it kind of a personal monalogue that we can all apply to ourselves
only thing i found a little out was the whole gonna fly vs fallen angel thing, but on the other hand it just depends on your interpretation
This is realy nice, realy kind of personal- it works how you've written it with all the contractions and slang... makes it kind of a personal monalogue that we can all apply to ourselves
only thing i found a little out was the whole gonna fly vs fallen angel thing, but on the other hand it just depends on your interpretation